The Second Demon

a five stars for you author-san. i just hope the MC acts like an wise person because of his age and this book doesn't turn into a shitty harem story. also a way to be unique and differ from other fan fics is for the MC to use a spear. hope this helps

This us going good so far, keep it up! . . . Don't mind me, just trying to reach 140 characters.

Wayyy to much babble. The whole story is like a quarter plot and three-quarters of him talking to himself, acting like a chuni, talking complete nonsense to himself. I honestly cannot stand these types of characters. To me, they are just a waste of time. I don't even know what's going on half the time because it keeps mentioning random-ass sht all the time. Like I would rather spend my time reading a story with a good plot, an interesting mc and just an interesting story rly. Not a story where the mc talks to himself for all of it.

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I'm gonna give you 5 star to motivate you! You need it bro. Because, the idea of the MC being centuries old character had never arrived in my mind... Okay, maybe I did cuz my "The Saiyan God" MC is a thousand years old lol

Yo! Shameless Author here giving my own novel quite the high stars but not 5 since its not perfect and nothing is perfect.. Before you dive into this novel.. This won't be a harem, he won't receive a system and won't be as op as Yuiichiro, the OG sun breath demon slayer...though he will be powerful as ****! The world is already there and the characters are already set, it's a fanfic, what do you expect.. Although, many things will change in the canon due to our mc's action And the moon demons will be my oc's..some of them, not all of them.. Do give constructive reviews and comments bout the story and please go easy on me, my heart is soft and weak...your choice tho Alright enough reading my review, go read the fanfic now and enjoy it

So far so good could use some more frequent updates tho 🍕

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really good, I never thought a story with a concept like this could exist. I have to take some points off for the cringe tho. I hope the cringe ends. you also don't update often so points taken from that too.

Very good, please keep writing. -----------------------------------------,-----------------------------------☆☆☆☆☆☆☆zczczvxgxgxvxvxvxvxbxgxgxbxb

the update timing is all over the place but the book is good well writen very few spelling mistakes some parts are weird but funny and it takes place in demon slayer anime this gets aproval from a person that has over 700 hours of reading on this app/site

I love the story, pls continue updating. It is interesting since he starts before the start of the story and instead of becoming a demon slayer he becomes a demon.

Haven't read it But the synopsis won me over so gg author ..........................I need 140 charactersssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss.

I love this and i wish there would be more chapter...................... ............…….................. ...................................

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