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The Phoenix of Jujutsu Kaisen

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This is gonna be AU in jujutsu kaisen new curses and people would be appearing and the ways techniques are used and can't forget about our mc as he traverse through this new world with the powers of a Phoenix

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BrazillianFox
BrazillianFoxLv4BrazillianFox

Being quite honest, I almost have an aneurysm reading this, the story is so rushed that I can't enjoy it, there are too many holes, like him unlocking his power and no one sensing it... in Tokyo which is literally the base of jujutsu in Japan. Or the MC acting like an idiot adult even though he is 4 years old and everything is fine (great sage or not it would be easy for someone to discover something wrong with him) and him literally creating a sword style out of thin air (parallel and quick thinking are no excuse) when he has never used a sword before, thinking 1000 times allows someone to learn much faster, but not to the extent that the author describes because many of the great sage's skills only work because Rimuru has skills to complement them... in short, the story is very poorly written, with a strange development that makes him super powerful from the start because... I don't see any beneficial development in this story

Fernizer
FernizerLv13Fernizer

It's bad. Rushed-kind of bad. Not thought through. Lots of mistakes were made, both grammar punctuation mistakes, and I didn't see any improvement over the course of more than 50 chapters. They were, more or less bad. Other thing is, author followed plot with only minimal changes, like someone on Satoru Gojo's level being born wouldn't change some things, like adding new characters or killing some others. I didn't see that change, it didn't make any sense for so many things to stay exactly the same, so I can't really ignore all those problems just because plot is interesting. Because it is not. It is not exactly bad for a new writer, but I wouldn't really recommend this one. 4/10 if I were being honest, maybe 5 if I were really generous.

DaoistjkYosT
DaoistjkYosTLv4DaoistjkYosT

To be honest, MC's design and character are so poorly written. He behaves like an idiot and takes nothing seriously. No person with a soul of 19 years should behave like this unless he is just a delinquent. I have seen my fair share of poorly designed characters but this just takes the cake... In short, this story is a total waste of time.

Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4Haku_Ouroboros

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VERMITHOR
VERMITHORLv11VERMITHOR

who is gonna be the waifu.more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter

Arnab_Panday
Arnab_PandayLv2Arnab_Panday

Well, what can I say? It's bad. I got to stop five times just to read up to 7th chapter. And I also skipped a few times in the middle. But his second work is decent.

Victor_7740
Victor_7740Lv13Victor_7740

I love this fic don’t have much complaining to do so just gonna spam s to fill up the space required ssssssssssssss

AppleBacon
AppleBaconLv2AppleBacon

Its actually pretty good, at least plot wise it's good. The writing can use some work but I like it either way. I'd give it a shot. .................................................................................................................

Maximus_Duke
Maximus_DukeLv3Maximus_Duke

The writing quality is absolute garbage from grammar to spelling and even what's happening in the story is completely inconsistent. I'm hoping this gets better as the authors other stories are good but they really need to edit this one.

Murod
MurodLv3Murod

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Mac_Laurin_AGBONON
Mac_Laurin_AGBONONLv1Mac_Laurin_AGBONON

Sinceramente eu gostei. Não é a melhor história. Não os melhores desejos. É um pouco apressado sim sim para tudo isso. Mas eu gostei bastante. Quero ver como o MC interage com o personagem principal. De todo jeito boa sorte ao autor.

Supper_mega
Supper_megaLv4Supper_mega

I want more more more more I need more more more. btw it's really good try to read it if you have enough time

Egoless
EgolessLv4Egoless

Great novel, don't listen to the haters keep writing. Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop

Majid_Shah_6563
Majid_Shah_6563Lv2Majid_Shah_6563

One of the best fanfic I have ever read , the action , comedy, character development and romance is all great

Rimuru_2412
Rimuru_2412Lv12Rimuru_2412

la neta no se porque leí esta mierda, si te gustan los personajes estilo chino puede que tegusten no esuq la historia se china pero el comportamiento del prota tan pendejo solo me recuerda a los protas chinos ( al 99% por que hay algunos buenos) decepción de historia no la recomiendo

MrGanja890
MrGanja890Lv4MrGanja890

it was good till the end I really liked this fanfiction

Gazze
GazzeLv1Gazze

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Ezra_Bii
Ezra_BiiLv14Ezra_Bii

Noice can’t believe I kept ignoring the book just for it to be good

K_Sidhu_2892
K_Sidhu_2892Lv14K_Sidhu_2892

Really good fan fic ashame that you dropped it

ReDawn097
ReDawn097Lv4ReDawn097

why you drop just why ? thos is just ridiculous

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