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The Life Of Normal-Taro

Penulis: The_Chimp
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Normal-taro is an alien; his real name is something that literally converts into Normal- taro in human language. He is of the planet Wados which translates to the 'planet of abnormalities'. Here, everyone has superpowers. And our Normal-taro works in disaster management in this superhuman muddled world. But all of a sudden, he just transported to Earth. Will he survive? *** [Note: The artwork in my cover does not belong to me. So, I'll be taking it off if the original artist asks me to do so.] Cover edit: ZinonWonder

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'Divinity Online'. The new breakthrough in the Full-Immersion Virtual Reality technology. After decades of work, Divinity Corp had achieved the impossible. Creating a massive video game world that people can enter and live in as if it were Earth. Their goal was clear, to create a world other than Earth that we can call home. A place where the laws of reality vanish, and the true ceiling of power shifts completely. Naturally, the shockwave Divinity Online created across the entire globe was unlike anything else. Every single person has heard of it, even those who have had no interest in video games before. Giant corporations and even governments immediately rushed to start planning to invest in this new world and just like that, billions of people had their eyes on one single date: the 19th of July. *** Arthur, like everyone else, had heard of the game and was as excited as everyone else to try it, if not even more. With how much he grew bored of his life on earth, this fantasy world was like the divine call he had been searching for. However, there was a very small problem. He had no money to buy the machine required to access Divinity Online. His wretched life had turned him into a broke teenager with no parents, and no relatives. But, by some kind of luck, he got his hands on one of those machines. Not knowing what was awaiting him in that world, Arthur was simply seeking one thing... A new opportunity in life and to find a purpose he could work for when he had none so far. [Welcome to 'Divinity Online'.] [Assimilation Started...]

Frost_Bite8 · Fantasi
4.3
205 Chs

The Author's POV

The person whom the world revolves around. The person who defeats all of his opponents, and ultimately gets the beautiful girl. The sole existence all villains fear. That is the protagonist. What about me? As a failed author who had only one success throughout his whole career, I had reincarnated into my late novel. "This is it" I thought, as I tightly clenched my fist. Did I just get reincarnated in my own novel? Is this where I reincarnate in a novel and become the protagonist? No. Sadly it's not that kind of novel, as I reincarnated as a mob. The world doesn't revolve around me. The girls don't come flocking towards me. The cheat items don't come to me. "Phew" I let out a sigh of relief. "Thank god I'm not the protagonist" I joyfully shouted as tears streamed down my cheeks. Wait, are you curious as to why I don't want to be the protagonist? I did forget to mention the most important thing when I was describing a protagonist. That is... They are calamity magnets. I just died. If I learned something from that, it's that it really isn't a pleasant experience. If possible let me live a long stable life. Thank you, whoever reincarnated me. I would later come to regret these words... ======== Reader Disclaimer : Please read the *Read before reading novel* in synopsis. ======== Credit to _oinkchan for helping me find the previous novel cover Credit to Rengoku for his amazing edit of the new cover. ======== Discord : https://discord.gg/FNAKgfyky4 Patreon : https://www.patreon.com/TheAuthorPOV

Entrail_JI · Fantasi
4.8
864 Chs
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Jilid 1 :Season 1: Beginning
Jilid 2 :Season 2: A New Leaf

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I write honest reviews. Hopefully, you can use this to temper your own writing. Writing Quality It's understandable. Lots of grammar mistakes, such as wrong usage of tenses or misspelled words. The syntax isn't as good as it could be, but I'm assuming the author isn't a native English speaker. There isn't a lot of descriptions. At times in the dialogue, the author uses something called the 'talking heads'. This is when two characters have nothing but dialogue, aka, something like this: "Hey." "Hello. How's it going." "I'm good. What about you?" "Good." To solve this, try adding dialogue tags, and actions between every few lines of dialogue, like so: Tang Xiao smirked at the girl in front of her. "So? What can you do about it?" The girl clenched her fists tightly. She glared at Tang Xiao with fire in her eyes, "Just you wait! Tang Xiao, you're not getting away with this!" she spat out, one shaking finger pointing towards Tang Xiao. "Oh, but I already have, darling." Not the best, but something I just came up with on the spot. You get the idea. Some sentences are mere repeats of one another. The character's dialogue sound especially forced, like puppets on a string. Stability Personally, I don't care about stability when reviewing. It's a useless part, so it's an auto 5. Story A decent pace, although a little bit on the faster side. The plot itself was...confusing. Personally, I would not continue reading it because there are no stakes, and Chapter 11 contains a massive wall break and a plot twist. What is the author's end goal in writing this? Trying planning out future arcs, and make a brief outline. We follow the story of Normal - Taro, who's constantly bullied. He transmigrates to Earth, where he can't speak the language. There is light foreshadowing for why he is there - that, I will give the author credit for. But remember, readers are usually here for action. Right now, the whole plot is like a puppet play. Character The only character that stood out was Taro. Even he was still quite one dimensional. My first impression of him was a dull-eyed character with no guts. But of course, this story is still young. Character development is always a thing. None of the other characters really stand out. This is mainly due to the forced dialogue. Create the characters first, author, and let them speak for themselves. Don't make them spew info-dumps. World The world of Wados sounds like one similar to BNHA. There was a brief description at the beginning, but the MC transmigrates soon after so I can't say much. Since I've only read up to chapter 11, this rating is going to be average as I have not seen any effective world building techniques other than the average info-dumps. Try to show the information, not tell it straight away. This will make your novel come alive, and allow the world to have depth. Good luck on your future works! Either way, the concept of this is pretty different from others, as most novels transmigrate into a fantasy world. I hope you can use this advice to improve in the future, and I look forward to seeing where you end up.

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