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Star Wars:Eternal

Appearing in the void, John finds himself in front of a strange floating text. With a mission to fulfill and a system as a guide, John begins his new life in the star wars universe. Watch how John changes fate and leads the galaxy to a new era. ************** (English is not my main language, I just use a translator to help anyone who wants to read the story, but I'm writing just for fun, so don't expect to much, and if there's something you don't like, just don't read it.) ************** (Disclaimer: I do not own Star Wars or any of their intellectual property,just my own character) ************** (Disclaimer:i do not own the cape image,it's just something that i found on google,the character won't be exactly that way, but it's a good general idea)

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Chapter 1:the system

"Huh?" I mumbled as I woke up in what seemed to be space, confusion and apprehension taking over my senses.

In any direction all there was was darkness, with small dots like stars in the distance.

'' where the hell am i, the last thing i remember ... '' I grabbed my head in the hope of pushing away the confusion and pulling the memories back.

I was returning from the office at night, when I saw two thugs trying to drag a girl into an alley, if it was a simple assault on a man I would simply call the police and ignore it later.

but there was no way I could ignore a girl when I was perfectly capable of taking them both down, they didn't seem to be armed and with the training I received so hard from my time in the army, I really managed to get them down, but when I was trying to calm the girl down I just heard one gunshot sound and then... pain.

Looking back the last thing I saw was a third thug, and judging by the phone in his left hand and the gun in his right pointing at me, he just stayed behind for a call and I didn't notice him.

"So I died? Is this the place where all the dead go? Why am I the only one here?"

[NO]

'' huh? '' I mumbled when I saw what looked like a text box floating in front of me. '' So this is not the way to heaven or hell? ''

[YES]

"Damn you can't be more specific? If I'm dead, what is this place?" I almost shouted a little annoyed by the not very informative text.

[CONGRATULATIONS! YOU HAVE BEEN CHOSEN FOR A NEW LIFE IN A NEW UNIVERSE]

[I WILL BE YOUR GUIDE FOR HELP IN THIS NEW LIFE, YOUR ONLY '' MISSION '' IS THAT YOU SHOULD TRY TO MAKE YOUR NEW WORLD A BETTER PLACE]

"wait, what new world would that be? and why do i have to be a hero? don't tell me i'm going to have to fight a damn demon king in a medieval world?" I said trying to suppress my panic for having just die and get new information.

[NO]

"So what world am I going to be in? Can you try to be a little more informative? Or maybe just talk?" I say with growing frustration at the short answers.

[REQUESTING ... CONFIRMED.]

[CHANGING TO A CONSIENT GUIDE]

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[your destination world has already been drawn for the star wars universe].

"Whew much better, but star wars huh, I was a big fan as a teenager, although I don't remember much at this point" I say as I finally get little information, and at the same time try to remember everything I knew about Star Wars.

I paused and tilted my head with a frown in confusion. '' Wait, why don't I feel anger, sadness or something about my death?''

[this is due to a skill presented by the system]

...

[PLAYER'S MIND]

It allows the player to think calmly and logically about things.

It allows a peaceful state of mind.

Grants immunity to most mental status.

Protects against compulsions and external control.

It does not prevent the player from feeling emotions, it only contains the minimum levels while active.

(WARNING: ACTIVATES AUTOMATICALLY IN BATTLE)

...

"Wait ... so I'm going to be sent to some kind of virtual world?"

[No, the star wars universe exists in an alternative reality, so you will be alive, however the powers that we are granting you will be easier to understand and accept in the form of a game]

'' Damn it all ... it's crazy 'I tried to put my hands on my face in a calming gesture, to finally realize that I'm just a mass of light in a human form,' 'Wow, what happened to my body?' '

* DING *

[WELCOME TO THE CHARACTER CREATION SCREEN, (STAR ​​WARS UNIVERSE)]

{Name selection}

current name: John Knox

Do you want to change?

'' huh, no''after thinking for a while, I see no need.

{Breed selection}

Current Race: Human

Do you want to change?

This time, along with a text box, a huge list of the races that exist in the star wars universe appeared in front of me. '' Um ... although I don't mind being human, I find it interesting to be able to change the race, but obviously I will have to be something similar ... '' taking a look around at what still looks like space, I imagine I have a lot of time, so I start browsing the list, and consider which race to choose.

After what seemed like hours, I decide a hybrid race of Hapan and Diathim, which would be the equiavalente o the elf race,and the race of angels mentioned by Anakim to padme''haha although it may be a little vain to choose two of the most beautiful races of star wars , the Diathim's ability to fly shoud be very useful''

He still doesn't know the amount of problems that choice would give him ....

I'm writing this more for fun, besides it's the first time I've actually written it, so don't expect too much, although I'll try my best to at least be nice.

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