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RWBY: Dungeons

Ruby Rose has always dreamt of becoming a huntress ever since she was a child, but, at the age of 3 she found out that she couldn't unlock her Aura like the other kids. Once her parents found out they gave her the cold shoulder and her big sister Yang used her as a punching bag, this was the norm for her for 2 years that is until her fifth birthday she suddenly appeared in a place she didn't know with a screen hovering infront of her face. [Welcome to the dungeon, please enjoy your stay] Will she survive or will she perish? that remains to be seen... Fucking Christ I hate Synopsis

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Something I noticed

Was rereading my story to refresh my head of what I was writing, I noticed that my writing skills grew a bit. Like my grammar and spelling were better the more chapters I wrote.

which is good tbh, it means that I'm making progress and that genuinely makes me happy

ofcourse there are still some typos and mistakes in grammar and plotholes but I've acknowledged they exist.

Another thing I noticed is that my chapter's word count gets shorter and shorter, but from what I have been through I could understand why.

The use of more complicated words made me grin, I never thought I would see the day I would have it in me to put in words I don't fully understand.

The last thing I noticed was that I don't know how to hold an atmosphere of a certain scene. an example of this is the latest chapter.

At the beginning it was semi serious with a little bit of tension but then I switched POVs then suddenly it turned light hearted and non serious, it completely destroyed the atmosphere it created in the beginning of the chapter.

I don't think I can fix that anytime soon, I don't have enough experience to do so but someday when writing this story I could manage to somehow learn to do so.

Anyways that's just what I noticed, thank you for supporting my work. It truly meant the world to me when I saw people still commenting, criticizing, and just reading my story.

The next chapter will be out possibly the day after tomorrow, once again, thank you for the support.