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Rinnegan in JJk

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Awakening powers that was said to belong to Gods in the Primordial era, Kenshin tries his very best to survive in a world ruled by evil.

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Chapter 1Mc and abilities

Hey there everyone, it's Dave here again with a new ff; Jujutsu Kaisen: Six Paths of the Distinguished Heavenly Gods. Had to release this ff in order to appease the Gods in my heart and to stop the nightmares. Please forgive me.

Anyway, if you've read my works before, you'll notice that some readers complain that I have a habit of nerfing my Mc's all the time, so before we delve into the ff itself, I want to take my time to explain how the mc's abilities work.

For starters let's talk about the Mc.

1. Name: Hayato Kenshin. {Please forgive me, I still don't know how to insert images🤧So if you guys have cool Mc images please insert for me}. His mom is American, making him a half breed, but unfortunately he's orphaned.

2. 16 year old, with short aqua blue hair and glossy purple irises. He's tall, handsome, I mean you guys already know the deal.

3. Yes this is a JJk ff and yes, the mc's technique has to do with the rinnegan.

I wanted to use the rinnesharingan, but I changed my mind at the end. Let's just go with the rinnegan for now. Also, I've adjusted his abilities to suit the JJk world.

For example; the Animal Path of the rinnegan would not summon those weird beasts from the narutoverse, rather it would work similar to curse spirit manipulation technique of the Geto clan, allowing Mc to assimilate and summon cursed spirits of specific grades at will, depending on mastery of the path.

Also, the Asura path would grant Mc the ability to harden or toughen his body into the likeness of a cursed tool of a specific grade, depending on the level of mastery of the path, while allowing him to summon any cursed tool of a specific grade, that he has seen before.

Meaning, at beginner level mastery, Mc would be able to harden his body, bones and even organs to the toughness of a grade four cursed tool, while he would be able to summon any grade four cursed tool he has come into contact with, and so on.

{I don't think I've done much nerfing here, or have I?}

You guys should comment how you think I should adjust the rest of the paths. Anyway, stay tuned for more chapters and don't worry, I'm planning on finishing the chainsaw man ff and will continue with the normal 1 chapter a day update schedule.

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let's start it a good idea but there is so many things wrong with, firstly your mc father supposed to be the greatest talent in the school yet he lost his life to non -sorcerers, I felt would have been better if your family were normal ppl or at least 4 grade sorcerers and your MC is the one with special grade potential so it could be a type of situation where the mc restores the lost honor of the clan or something, next u are putting to many oc in the fanfic ,the showed us a year of students can only consist of 3 students , u could have just had nanami , the mc and the guy that died that was in first yr with nanami , also wants with the fraud zenin clan heir , major zenin ,the real heir is naoya , and his father is naobito zenin ,and they were around during this time , your lore is wrong, also how are u going to explain how the oc are not going to be prese t during when canon starts or are u going to add all of them and make it more difficult , gojo clan is already a branch clan in canon , gojo clan is branch clan of yuta former clan , also i know u are trying to make a rinnegan some kind of upgraded six eyes and your trying to hype up your clan bc u are failing , u got the abilities all wrong gojo abilities doesnt involve repulsion , attraction and creating black holes ,gojo abilities allow him to manipulate distance his abilities divided into 3 , negative infinity neutral infinity and positive infinity negative infinity allows him to create negative distance, bc negative distance isn't supposed to exist the universe tries to correct it self by drawing all there by matter into the nearby to fill in the negative distance , neutral infinity is just the infinity just stops anything in front of gojo , positive infinity does the opp , it adds more distnace in space , the universe corrects that by pushing everything out of that space , create more space for the new distance added , also the rinnegan visual abilities are nothing compared to the six eyes , the rinnegan cant see through walls nor can it see far distance , rinnegan at most can see at the cellular level while six eyes can see at the atomic level , see through walls, read cursed energy flow and see souls of individuals . , your mc had random change in character he went from being a loner , someone who likes to keep to himself , to a more cringe version of gojo also on top your writing style is cringe

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