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Reborn Metal BAT on the MCU

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A new graduate dies, but has a chance to be born back. (very poorly written, I use the help of a translator, I'm still studying English and I'm trying to write better)

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Marvel: I'm a Symbiote

Alex Hunt was a smart man. By no means was he a genius, but he stood solidly in the above-average class of society. He thought that when he died, he would at least go with a bang. Sadly for him though, his death was as generic as they came. Struck to death by a truck driven by a drunk driver who wasnโ€™t looking. โ€˜At least thereโ€™s a bangโ€ฆโ€™ He thought as his head banged on the concrete. He thought that that was it for him, but destiny had other plans. He was reborn. Reborn as a Symbiote in a version of Earth that was definitely not the MCU. And with a system to boot. He didnโ€™t know what he was going to do. But his first priority was to survive in this chaotic world that heโ€™d just found himself in. One thatโ€™s far more chaotic than the MCU but similar at the same time. ============================================= Why am I writing this? I wanted to read a good Venom fanfic, couldnโ€™t find it. Hence, I had to do it myself. There will be R-18 and it wonโ€™t be the conventional kind. It will be degenerate R-18 if you would call it that. Againโ€ฆ I cannot stress this enoughโ€ฆ Thereโ€™s quite a bit of extreme stuff in this book, so donโ€™t complain in the comments about it. Will all of it be sex? Of course not, far from it actually. Iโ€™m trying to write a story with developed characters and a nice plot that Iโ€™m very ambitious about. It's not just R-18, there's going to be quite a bit of action too. The R-18 is a bonus. It will be pretty far from the realm of normality though (Itโ€™s venom. Of course itโ€™s not normal sexโ€ฆ But the human element will be present.) Tags: [Non-human protagonist] (Surprise!) [Harem] (Again, surprise!) [Evil MC] (Maybe Chaotic Neutral...) [Gore] (Probably, the killing may get a little violent and brutal) And probably a lot more. Iโ€™m not sure if I will completely stick to these tags, but thatโ€™s the current plan. Might change as the story progresses. Oh, and alsoโ€” Multiversal collapse. ============================================= I'm open to criticism so lay it on me if you have any genuine problem. Join my discord, you can give me suggestions and communicate with me regularly to get updates. https://discord.gg/c3kCBE32vn If you want to support me check out my Patrรฉon. I post 15 advanced chapters of the book on my Patrรจon along with some exclusive R-18 scenes. Check it out! www.patreon.com/addyctive ============================================= Also, none of the art is mine. I got it from Reddit. If the creator sees this and wants credit or wants me to take it down, just let me know. This is purely a work of fan fiction. Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the characters.

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I'm just gonna leave this review here 'cause I think this novel needs some positive feedback. While it's true that grammar seems to be the author biggest flaw I didn't find it to be as problematic as described in others reviews: words are never misspelled and the rarely seen syntax errors don't pose a problem to the comprehension of the story or the fluidity of the narration (since they're few and far between. I'm instead really intrigued by the plot of the story. The MC's power grants for an error proof power escalation that will avoid the fighting gets boring while also allowing him potential for growth. (I just hope the struggle for the win will be showcased with more Pathos in the future) The characters are vibrant enough, with clearly (although a bit one dimensional for now) personalities and ambitions. I'm a fan of the cast since several less know characters are used; also I really like both Annie (the other OC) powers and appearance. The power scaling is also well planned in my opinion. As for the world, although some wacky stuff happens (like him being the leader of a gang at 12), it's justified enough troughs the narration and the fact that this is a universe in which realism is kinda futile given the context. All in all this promises to be a well tough out story (especially considering the author is new at this). If I'm allowed to give some tips as a reader and not a experienced writer I would advise you to: -increase the dialogue; narration is the lazy man's way out and allows for very little creativity as emotions tends to get lost when only showing the results or actions. Writing dialogue consents for more confrontations to take place showcasing more intent in your character while it would also allow you to: be less paranoid about grammar (nobody speaks like they would write) and leave more the true thoughts of the speaker for the reader to figure out which I find a major appeal in. -increase the description; I trust in your creativity since I really like Annie's character and I would appreciate if you showcased it more during the story even in more subtle things: like reactions, scenery, actions etch... You shouldn't be afraid to slow down the plot for the sake of painting a more detailed picture. ...................................... Although I just wanted to show my appreciation for your novel this already turned into a thesis so I won't mind adding a few extra things at this point. I really hope the fact that his group is getting infiltrated won't be just an appendix to the fact that he now has great influence but will instead will turn into a plot point like Natasha "infiltration" did in iron man 2 I'm from the #NOHAREM gang, not that it will prevent me for reading the story. I just think that while being sexually attracted to multiple people being romantically invested in more than one person is not a thing. Thanks again for sharing your work and for reading my unjustifiably long review (hopefully)

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