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Logan179
Logan179Lv13yr
2021-09-08 06:43

the story started out good but there are many things that I didn't like as an MC to be able to fight the Phoenix being it was already showing that even with his power the MC still has a limit since he lost for x-23 not to mention that he loses an arm and totally unnecessary and meaningless besides that the whole fight with the X-Men had no reason the MC just needed to leave but even with all that I still I decided to give the story a chance but seeing the last chapters I have but no interest in reading this story and a pity as I thought the story idea was very good

Reborn Metal BAT on the MCU

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Umm, Author-san could probably do a better job with the help of some grammar app or something. The writing is messy and it's all cramped up...

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