Overlord: All In One Demon

no world traveling please, and i know 50 is small but please make yggdrasil arc smaller, all good overlord fanfics make that arc too big and then get dropped before they reach the new world, apart from that great story, keep up the good work

System what should I do? What's next for the system? System I pooped what should I do? the hero cannot take a single step without asking the system, although in the first chapter he used interesting ideas on how to bypass the limit of desires when he wanted. but then the hero became dumb, 1. constantly asks the system what to do. 2. rebirth in another world, as for me, karma -500 will change the personality of Mr. 3. doing a long quest turning into an incomprehensible race is stupid. can’t the hero throw money at the developers so that he can immediately be given a race with the ability to play as several game characters at the same time switching between them like a doppelganger?

Well it's good certainly but not my cup of tea. I mean we're already at Chapter 9 but I still don't understand some aspects about the main character such as his personality changes post-reincarnation or his endgame goals as they were never spoken about in any chapter.The writing quality is good but the world background is another story. Sometimes it feels like jumping from chapter 1 to chapter 7, you get the idea, i didn't feel that coheration essentiel that I get when iIread an overlord fanfiction.Also...WHERE IS SKELETON DADDY ?!!!?!

A good beginning for a story, indeed 😌. The story so far is progressing great 👍. It's rare sight to see an Overlord Fic with a Demon protag. Would Like to continue reading it 😉. Wish it wouldn't be dropped in the middle like some fics out there 😑.Overall a great fic 👍.

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Very promising fan-fic with good writing and jokes Good background And i specially liked the First Devil racial class

I only have one thing to say. Its perfect. I mean the mc is well written, I personally like it when the mc in overlord fanfics are starting in the game and also stay there a while and I hope it'll stay that way. The only sad thing is that the story isn't currently continuing. I hope it'll continue soon.

Beyond the MC acting like an idiot in the first chapter, this is actually a great story. I just hope you make this a multiverse story, as new world is too boring and the MC will face no difficulties there. Making him travel to other worlds will be a lot more fun and it will certainly spice up the story

Multi class avatar simular to the fanfic Overload Ancient One. Dialogue is pretty stiff and lacking. Though the quests he goes on to unlock classes and jobs are neat. He follows the AI cheat which is smart but the wording makes it seem like he never thinks for himself. Overall its good enough to read and follow.

So far soo good , you can never have enough of overlord fanfics since most of them tend to get forgotten with time , hopefully it won't be the case here

I love Overlord a lot and it looks quite interesting, I'll wait when you have a considerable amount of chapters to review seriously (5 Stars because it's overlord, duh).

Overlord fanfic for the win!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I’m enjoying this a lot. I need way more though

cooler than some of the other overlord stores

Loving the Story so far the MC is taking His time and using His system to gather Power in Yggdrasil which is awesome and i also looking Forward to the Powers He is gonna Show when He finally reaches New world especially because its gonna be awesome to See what He will have reached by then.

don't spent to long on the game. every overlord fic makes that mistake and never makes it to actual Canon or gives up because they made an op charecter overlord is about op yes but it's also about all the plans and plots. hope this fic does it well

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Great so far keep it up! Hope to see some horseman as npcs later on!!!