drunken_fitter

that sucks, I'm beautiful, I'm gorgeous, I awakened the nen aura. Praise me, these are not the author’s complexes at all, this is a description of the hero.

wait - how can our character steal from GG something that the hero doesn’t already have? what stupidity.

This is true? Is such a stupid recruitment even possible? Or for readers, the hero suddenly became stupid and the recruitment plan was compressed to one evening, although the hero must be tested for at least a month to understand whether he will betray his gang at the first opportunity or not. the hero could leave with money and an adoptive mother, recruitment suddenly became super fast, the author should have read how people get into a gang, ciao

Honestly? is the author proud of his “unexpected plot twist”? my God, a child could have guessed this twist, especially if everything is told by the author himself at the beginning of the chapter, it’s a disgrace. and yes, there is too much meaningless chatter, and repetition of words, if they are removed the chapter will be reduced by half.

eh, any 100-level player in the world of Overlord OP, but the Chinese author, apparently compensating for his height, makes his hero much stronger even than 100-level players, because this is not a Chinese fanfic if the hero is not the strongest and smartest, the title should say: Emperor/god / great / strongest. why is this? meaning? as a result the fanfic is just garbage

they give the hero a technomancer, and a system, and a building that cannot be penetrated or hacked... and they don’t wipe his ass? or does it have a button to solve all problems? What's the point of giving the hero LITERAL divine powers? the author is a lazy juvenile fool???? literally, insignificant garbage, the author learn to write and construct normal plots

I have never seen such an obvious embodiment of the author in the MC, and the subsequent self-gratification. How can I make the “defeat all” button? I pressed it and that’s it, the enemies are defeated. how about doing something for the only girl in the squad so far? so far it looks like a teenager’s wet dream on the theme “but I would!”

the beginning was uplifting, a slightly dark story about how the hero gradually became stronger... and this story is not about that. the hero is a whiner and a weakling who wants to commit suicide because he is not given the strength. just train like everyone else slowly, since all this is not for the hero, so he will sit and whine, doing nothing. but having received the system, the hero instantly became an arrogant freak, and yes, Chinese clichés.... conclusion: this story is trash

мусор, герой нытик и тряпка. но набравшись сил, он вдруг стал сверхсильным с эго выше гор... автор, вы что-то компенсируете? твой маленький нефритовый посох? тебя бьют?

oh what a greedy little Chinese guy. Once in the world of the one piece, he did not train, but waited until everything fell into his hands. got chakra? maybe you can try to control it, you're a Naruto fan, you should know how important control is. but no, the little little Chinese just sits and greedily fantasizes how strong he will become