PeachMonarch

ohhh the brothers diary probably.

way to many reactions for no reason progress the story already like wtf lol.

this isn't even a fanfic it's ai garbage for one and reads like a history book.

ai garbage

no it's the same reason why in dbz they don't fight thru the solar system any being who is at the same strength threshold and relatively small won't be fighting through a solar system their blows are evenly matched so they don't move great distances only chineese cultivation novels have charecters do that shit cause cool factor or flashy moves.

your previous ff did this too. you upload chapters that repeat the process in different ways. it's not even pov changes it just completely changed. why i never go to your paetron.

bro not even training to learn how to fight or anything eadting his chance

fucking stupid.

i will drop this so fast if she dies or they separated again lol

think wan is immortal idk lol.