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One Piece: Pirate King's Path

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Years before Luffy and the Strawhat Pirates set sail, there is a boy, who is living in a little village in the East Blue, whose dream was to have freedom. He dreamt of being free and having no restrictions. And this dream led him to many adventures, many friends, and many enemies. But that is a story for the future. Join Alexander D. Great in his journey to become the man with the most freedom like his idol, Gol D. Roger. The man who stands on top of the world. The man known as the Pirate King. This is my first novel and I am a newbie author. I am just doing this for fun and this idea just popped into my head. This novel may not follow the canon and there might be some mistakes along the way please forgive me for those. There will be no harem the MC will have his pairing. Leave your reviews and tell me what I can improve in the story. Thank you very much! P.S. I don't own anything in this novel except my OCs. I also don't own the cover. If the cover is yours and you don't want me using it, just tell me and I will remove it. Thank you again

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Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!

Rob was a high-level hacker and wanted by many government organizations because he leaked the secrets of many countries. So he didn't dare to come out of his hiding much. Since he was alone, he lived a difficult life, which that he found the joy and the excitement of life in only two things: The rule of the Internet, and the anime world. One day he came across an interesting advertisement on his personal computer that turned his life upside down. [Ding!] [The art publishing system is being prepared...] [The system is ready!] From that time onwards his goal became to draw One Piece manga in the pirates' world! And make the great era of pirates even more chaotic! ¶¶¶¶¶ Author: BlackStar_BH (Me) ¶¶¶¶¶ Note: Needless to say, this book has the same idea as "Creating The Manga Of Naruto On Naruto World Become My Ultimate Goal!" But here it applies to the world of One Piece, I was inspired by the idea and I wanted to apply it to the world of One Piece, and I hope it succeeds, of course, there will be a conspiracy and I will make sure to improve the story according to the readers opinions. ¶¶¶¶¶ As for publishing chapters, it would depend entirely on the interaction the story receives, whether it is 4 chapters a day or 2 chapters or 1 chapter or 0 chapters... It all depends on the readers' enthusiasm for this interesting book. ¶¶¶¶¶ I don't own One Piece nor do I own its characters, all I own is the protagonist, after all, this is just a fanfic without any profit, just for fun. I don't own Bleach, Attack on titan, Hunter X Hunter, Naruto, and I don't own their characters. ¶¶¶¶¶ EXTRA TAGS: #ATTACKONTITAN #HUNTERXHUNTER ¶¶¶¶¶ My Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/BlackStar_BH (+30 Chapters ahead Webnovel.) My Ko-fi: (New) https://ko-fi.com/blackstar_bh (+30 Chapters ahead Webnovel.)

BlackStar_BH · Komik
4.7
831 Chs

Inner Voice: All Heroines Hear My Inner Voice

Reincarnated and traveling to another world, Eiji Seiya initially thought the world was normal. That was what he thought before he met the heroine and protagonist of the franchise he had watched in his previous life. Not only that, after he awakened the Inner Voice System to grow strong by complaining about plot, heroine and protagonist in his heart to get many rewards. He is determined to increase his power so that he can save his home world, the world where he was reincarnated that was hit by the disaster "Honkai" and save beautiful girls like Kiana, Mai, Bronya, Rita and others who had tragic endings in the original works! "I will save them all!" However... Everything went smoothly... Eiji earned rewards every time he changed the plot in another franchise. It's just that... What's wrong with these heroines? Lala Satalin Deviluke who was supposed to be engaged to the protagonist instead became his fiancée. Sona Sitri suddenly called him to the student council office and said she wanted to make a deal with him. Rias Gremory who was supposed to ask the protagonist for help to solve her political marriage problem with Riser Phenex inexplicably came to him. The girls were disgusted at the protagonists of their respective franchises. Something was wrong here! Not only that, heroines like Kotegawa Yui, Sairenji Haruna, Akeno Himejima, Kuroka, Serafall Leviathan, Grayfia Lucifuge, Sakurajima Mai, Ai Hoshino, Kasumigaoka Utaha and others... They like him! All the super beautiful and sexy women that many men in the world covet surround him and leave their respective protagonists. Grayfia even betrayed her husband. Eiji who saw all this was dumbfounded. At first he was confused as to why these heroines were surrounding him, but gradually he realized and knew that it was all happening because ... His inner voice! - The plot that has been changed by the MC: To Love Ru: 83% Highschool DxD: 82% Shinmai Maou no Testament: 92% Oregairu: 89% Saekano: 84% Oshi no Ko: 100% Rascal Does Not Dream Of Bunny Girl Senpai: 100% Mieruko-chan: 89% Trinity Seven: 38% This is the plot change process of the latest chapter and will change as the story progresses. By the way, the grammar at the beginning is bad and will improve as the chapter progresses. However, my writing style will not change much because this is an inner voice novel, which means that there will be many reactions from each character. Oh and in chapter hundreds there will be a group chat to prevent the loss of interaction between the heroines. It's a special chat group for the heroines in the MC's harem. - Get the latest chapters faster on my patreon. Support me on patreon to keep me motivated to write more chapters: www.patreon.com/DogLicker

DogLickerGods · Komik
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495 Chs
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Jilid 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Jilid 1 :Enter: Alexander D. Great
Jilid 2 :The Start of an Adventure
Jilid 3 :Paradise Adventure

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AeternabilisLv14

Only up to chapter 9 but I have already have two major problems with this story.... The mc was stated to not have any friends so he was a very isolated individual. He was like Shikamaru in the fact he was a genius and read/watched clouds every day. This was like the first impression we get of the mc. Then suddenly out of nowhere, it all went out the window. It's like the author made him a completely new character. A very upbeat individual who shouts a lot and is a little stupid. Trying to make the mc like roger I guess? I don't have a problem with this type of character however, the fact that the first impression of him was just so vastly different just rly destroys the story. Like what happens if the author decides he doesn't like this type of personality in the future and does a 180 again... We will always be asking questions cause it has already happened once so it will prob happen again. The other thing that annoys me is the author's liberal use of capital letters. It is just way too jarring to read. If you want us to know that he is speaking loudly, shouting or whatever you use ! I mean that is the whole fcking point of them... Oh yeah, not rly a problem per se but why tf does he need two swords and guns? I mean that's just way too much no? It should be one gun and one sword or two swords in each hand or two guns instead. There is literally no upsides to having two of each weapon. If he had more hands then yeah but he only has two... Sry but this just doesn't make sense to me... It's like... say he is fighting someone and has both swords in his hands. He wants to use his gun but fck how can he? He would need to sheath one of his swords and reach for his gun. Same if it was the other way around. But if he does this he would just be asking to get destroyed by the opponent... One second in a fight can mean everything. They only feasible way he could fight with them all is if he threw them to the ground when he needs to change. This thou has massive downsides of say what happens if he needs to use it again? He can't because he threw it to the ground... and then is he going to just throw his weapons to the ground every time? No matter how you put it, it just makes absolutely no sense...

soubhik05
soubhik05Lv4

Alright so, this is a good story but with glaring mistakes mc is weak as **** even though he has mastered the most advanced form of haki as one should know that in order to master haki you need a very powerful body. Apart from that since he already has a strOng physique (as he has mastered haki) he should have no problem with mastering his devil fruit as it reqUires stamina, we also saw that when blackbeard got tremble tremble fruit he instantly was able to use it to its full power. yes i agree that awakening the fruit is not Easy as it requires one to be familiar with their fruit. However even without awaking his fruit or eveN without his devil fruit just based on his Haki alone he should be able to fight an Admiral. Yes he may not be able to win duE to his lack of experience but fight them on an equal footing should be of no problem specially sCinCe he has master emission haki. After all in one piEce the hIgh level battle are all about haki and devil fruit are just for support pUrPoses as we Saw in the fight between whitebeard and roger. So anyways i felt that author has some serious lack of understanding about the anime But apart from that the character design of the mc was great 👍 as well as the whole training arc i enjoyed those But then it went downHill as it did not make sense for the mc to be so weak Also for a mythical zoAn his devil fruit was specially weak In fact Robin’s devil fruit seemed much stronger as she did not have any limitations on the number of hands the devil friit Could grow amd also we saw her Use the devil fruit to create Giant legs which could stomp entire armys. So again some serious work needed on the devil fruit... ... would suggest the auther to google AshuRa in Indian mythology as it will give him a loT of ideas. Thats all, hope you do a Rewrite as Your idea has a lot of potential as long as you fiX the obvious mistakes.

LucasNamikaze
LucasNamikazeLv1

I'll start by talking about what I thought of this fanfic so far. The beginning of the story was good, the protagonist presented himself as an intelligent person and with a strategic mind, but little by little he changed and became more stupid and noisy, like the typical MC shonen. Another thing I didn't like about this fanfic is the fact that the author gave the protagonist an Akuma no Mi of the Mythic Zoan type where in theory he should transform the user into an Asura, but the only thing she does is to grow more arms, none special ability or physical transformation that we all know that an Akuma no Mi of the Zoan Mythic type has, because in all Akuma no Mi of the Zoan type a type of physical transformation in the user, be it a hybrid or total form, in addition, all Akuma no Mi of the Mythic Zoan type have a special ability, for example, the admiral of the Sengoku fleet in his Buddha form has the ability to generate shock waves with his palms and Marco of the Whitebeard pirates has flames that are capable of healing the user, Akuma no Mi appears to be of Paramecia type instead of Zoan type, the author suggested that a big change will occur when awakening happens, but to use Akuma no Mi’s hybrid or full transformation skills isn’t n It is necessary to be in the state of Upon awakening, by the way, this Akuma no Mi chosen for the protagonist is very impractical, because the greater the number of arms the slower the MC is, there is also the fact that the arms that come out from the back have a range smaller than the main arms, since the created limbs do not extend, unless opponents attack from behind for the rest of the things there are few advantages, it would have been better not to have given MC an Akuma no Mi if it were so, nor has the excuse of running out of time, since the protagonist has eaten Akuma no Mi for years, in all these years has he never seen another skill besides growing more hands? I don't think it's possible. Anyway this fanfic is not to my liking, but I will give 4 stars to motivate the author, because it is not easy to write a story. Sorry for any grammatical errors, I am writing this through the Google translator.

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