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Naruto form start refuse the marriage of Mito Uzumaki[FanFiction ]

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What is Naruto form start refuse the marriage of Mito Uzumaki[FanFiction ]

Baca novel Naruto form start refuse the marriage of Mito Uzumaki[FanFiction ] yang ditulis oleh penulis Silver_mix yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. travelling to different Anime world doing task getting stronger and creating your own world it's going to be a long journey the start is wrong but hope the ending is right.[ if you have any suggestion...

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travelling to different Anime world doing task getting stronger and creating your own world it's going to be a long journey the start is wrong but hope the ending is right. [ if you have any suggestions you can write me I will soon add link to discord. this is going to be my third novel the previous to got dropped because of depression previous 2 got dropped but this one is fan fiction as longest my health doesn't go too bed I should able to complete this novel for my current situation just walking is quite painful. my English is not something I have learnt in school so it's not perfect so I hope someone can help me playing is always good even if somebody didn't I should table to complete this normal that is my only wish ]

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The number one favorite wedding in history. Good morning, Captain

[ new article: Rich Family's wedding pet, young master Liang's baby sweet wife ] He was the youngest captain on an international flight route. He was calm, wise, and handsome Under the bed, his messy clothes were scattered all over the ground. "GET LOST! " She kicked him. "Baby, didn't you say you were hungry? I was just obeying your wishes... " he smiled evilly and grabbed the little foot that was flying towards him. She was so angry that she was speechless, but his eyes were full of love. * * * He was the youngest and most handsome captain. At the same time, he was also the beloved son of the Chairman of NEPC International Airlines. With his own abilities, he was promoted from a flight attendant to a captain. He was only thirty years old. She was a flight attendant on the Far Eastern Airlines. They hid the fact that they were married and lived a life of collusion. * * * * The flight attendants were all afraid of him. Those who did not know the truth even asked her to fly with him. "I'm not going... " she refused desperately. That colleague looked at her pitifully. "Why? Are you not going to help me? " "You're married, and I'm not. WHO'S SAFER? " She said shamelessly, going against her conscience. After saying that, she regretted it. "If you're not married, then you'll lie on the same bed with me every night. Are you a mistress? " That night, she was chased out of the bedroom and slept on the sofa for the whole night. If I love you, I won't be like a climbing kaleidoscope, using your tall branches to show off.

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Cancerous_worm
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Everything is average but I couldn’t read for more than 1 minute before my head ached from the writing, it’s worse than a machine-translated (mtl) novel.

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well.... at least i give you a 4☆ for effort... i just had to read the badly written title to understand that you barely have any english knowledge since having grammar mistakes on the novel title is a mess.

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ImNex
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Here to support the new author. You might not be experienced and will probably drop the fanfic but if you actually like writing, don't give up. People might complain constantly so get used to it and never surrender. I have a few quotes for you. Take one step at a time. Giving up is worse than being stuck in infinite loops of failures. It's very easy for us humans to find constant new passions in life but need guts to remain faithful in one specific project and skills to profit out of it. I'm going to be honest. Your work right now is not even readable but I believe it will get so much better one day. Writing a book is like planting a tree. You put a seed of idea inside the ground then pour words of water everyday consistently and you won't notice it but the tree will start growing slowly and surely until oneday it starts bearing fruits of money. Ofcause, not every tree grows fruit and the quantity between each trees will always vary. It depends on the quality of the seed. So make sure that the idea of your novel or fanfic actually have potential as well. Was it confusing? If it was, apologies. I kind of start typing what I have in mind everytime I'm giving advice, lol. Bye :)

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