My Angel system
In old times a boy named Luis had lost his parents at a very tender age, he never even got to know who his parents were. With his parents gone he had to be taken care of by his wicked aunt who hardly fed him once a day, in effort to get food Luis was adviced to steal by a strange book without minding the punishment of burning given to thieves. When Luis was caught he ran into the forest and the villagers including his aunt chased him down with torches. "I think it's best I surrender now" Luis stopped running and was panting now. "I think I can see him!" he heard the village blacksmith shout. He took a little step backwards and down a hole he went. "Noooooo!!!" Luis screamed as he went down the hole, the last thing he saw was a red glowing light and then it was lights out for him. "What happened?" Luis groaned. "Where am I? And why is my body so cold" he said touching his arm" A screen appeard in front of him. [ System revived ] "What?" That was where the true journey began. Now the fate of mankind lies in his hands as he keeps completing tasks and quests to get stronger. Luis keeps getting stronger but the question is: Will he be able to stop Lucifer? Join my discord channel for more info about the novel. https://discord.gg/7DvJCBfvSy Also if you have time, you can check out The Angel System by ECM Manga.
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All eyes were on the Angel as he slowly walked off the pitch holding his shoulder as though it was hurting him.
"Well, I didn't expect Crockel academy to win the first competition of the day," Rosa said with a disappointed look on her face.
"Is that boy's shoulder really wounded?" Chris said with a suspicious look on his face.
"You saw him get stabbed," Mia said.
"Maybe the dagger didn't go as deep as we thought because he wasn't acting like someone who had a serious injury on his shoulder," Levi said.
"Are you kidding me, he was clearly struggling?" Mia said.
"I didn't see any struggles with all the things he did," Levi said.
Luis had finally gotten to his seat now where he was greeted with congratulations from Ace.
"Nice performance," Tania said.
"Thanks." He said.
Chloe didn't congratulate him as she seemed to be more concerned about his shoulder.
"How's your shoulder?" She asked.
"The pain's still there but I'm okay," Luis replied.