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Last Shelter Online

Penulis: Sabet_Saga
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What is Last Shelter Online

Baca novel Last Shelter Online yang ditulis oleh penulis Sabet_Saga yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Together with the shocking death of a famous gamer, a new VRMMORPG was launched.“This is not just a game, this is about building a second life.”Said Dr. Jeff Johnson, the founder of Ninecent, when he ...

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Together with the shocking death of a famous gamer, a new VRMMORPG was launched. “This is not just a game, this is about building a second life.” Said Dr. Jeff Johnson, the founder of Ninecent, when he announced the new game. [LAST SHELTER ONLINE] It quickly became the number one wanted game that even affected the global cryptocurrency market. However, after the mysterious death of his brother. Hiro’s life had been wrecked with no money left to spend and no place left to live. That is, until he received a surprise late birthday gift from the deceased. While other gamers around the world were scrambling to get the limited edition of full-dive VR, Hiro received the mysterious beta-testing access. Being an expert gamer himself, Hiro soon found something unusual about the new game, and it seems that there’s much more to it than a simple game. Will Hiro find the truth behind it all? [System linked.] [Welcome to Last Shelter Online]

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training my daughter to kill me

In a field of snow, you can see dead bodies on the ground, the snow that was once white is stained with blood, going further you notice that the bodies increase, forming a mountain. On top of this mountain is a man, with snow-white hair, navy blue eyes that, for those who don't know him, convey calm and tranquility. Your white clothes have turned to red "Your child is about to be born" said a Chinese white dragon in a low voice, next to him is a man on top of a mountain of corpse. “ahhhhhh, how boring there is no one strong to face me, when that brat is born I will make his life hell, since my lineage runs in his veins he will become a worthy opponent, maybe he can even kill me hahaHAHA” says the man with a psychopathic voice. ****************************** “Lord your son… A girl was born” said an old man with a wrinkled face with a hand covered in bandages, he was shaking, his legs almost giving way to the ground in fear of his sovereign's fury. “HAAAAA!! fuck it, I hope she is useful and can be a future opponent to me, if necessary I will make her training much worse than hell " said the furious man when he learned that his future opponent was a woman, who in this world is only worth to political marriages. The man was determined to put his daughter through training that even demons would fear, and they became saints if they could escape. Well that was your plan but... “Why the hell is my daughter so cute?” thought the man Watch as the man known as the Monarch of Chaos begins his journey to make his daughter the strongest person as he slowly develops affection for her, unable to watch anyone touch a lock of her hair. *this novel will have a random release, but I will try to release at least one chapter every 14 days *this is my first novel, and to make matters worse i don't speak english i'm translating it through google translate, so expect errors *No protagonist being a wolf in sheep's clothing *image generator by AI

cosmos_lords · Fantasi
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A Two-paged Grimoire.

One night, a 21-year old man named John Skuna just got a grimoire out of nowhere after his birthday. The grimoire was too small to even be called a book of magic. He unknowingly enters the realm of magic he never knew existed all along, just hidden in plain sight. Warning: All of the text below may be copy-pasted somewhere inside the story, so you don't actually have to worry about not reading this part. You may choose to read the text below or not. It serves as a guide to avoid confusion haha. There are currently three known mage bloodlines amongst the mages left in the world (though there may be even more); S, P, and F. John Skuna was unknowingly a S. S are the ones with magic specialized to inflict despair and hope. Their power is not absolutely clear and may be random, but it will always inflict despair or hope. They are also one of the rarest known mages out there. P can bend and alter light and energy at will. Many of them are silent serial killers. F can alter mass movement of matter, depending on their power. They are the most common of all the mages, with some of them having an almost identical magic with those of the P. Their magic ranges from renovation to total destruction. There are also the fabled SKs who use others' respect, praise, trust or even just a belief in them to get stronger. They are thought to be big figures in society, but no one is yet to observe anyone with that magic yet. There may also be magic bloodlines that are lesser known or not even known yet. Mages have a magical energy source known as Mana. One is powerful if one has considerable amounts of mana and vice versa. Once mages obtain their own grimoires, they will emit a unique aura which can feel overwhelming but safe, signifying their mana. Only mages can feel this aura. Mages with more mana emits a stronger aura, but some magic can disable this aura, muffling the casting mage from other mages. Although the amount of mana a mage has can be oftentimes random, more powerful mages having more mana tend to be near the original bloodlines with both parents having pure magic bloodlines. Although mages may arise from parents where one is human, one can be cut out of the bloodline when they have little to no mana at all. In that case, they cannot spread their magical bloodline anymore. Someone with a magic bloodline will automatically obtain a grimoire after the day they somehow triggered their power. It may happen at their birth, or later in their life. Those who do not obtain their grimoire through triggers will obtain theirs after the day they become 21 years old. The magic one can cast are listed in the grimoire written in complex metaphors one must understand in relation to their personality to fully harness. One may obtain a small grimoire with 10 pages only or a big grimoire with 200 or more pages. The list of one's magic gets random after that. This is the first story I wrote here in Webnovel. Yeah. So if there are inconsistencies in my storymaking, don't hesitate to tell me.

MeitoKenChop · Fantasi
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Sabet_Saga
Sabet_SagaPenulisSabet_Saga

Hi! I am the author of this novel. Firstly, I really want to scream because I am so excited to finally released this novel! Yeay! *Hand Clapping for myself*. My name is Sabet, I am a female author who loves to play online game (too much). So that will be the main reason why I want to write a Game Novel, and boom! here we got LAST SHELTER ONLINE. My nationality is Indonesia, but currently I am active as a college student in number one Engineering Campus in Thailand. Yes, I got scholarship! But sadly, I can not graduate on time due to COVID-19 pandemic. And the bad news is, my scholarship will be run out soon. So I need to work hard to pay my study and my life in abroad (I can feel the MC here). I wish that my novel can be loved and enjoyed by everyone, I wish that I can win this biggest competition of WSA 2022. In order to do that, your support is very important to me. Best Wishes, Sabet_Saga.

Avan
AvanLv13Avan

One of the best game stories in webnovel that gives me the SAO vibe. It was beautifully written with several layers of mystery that made me keep guessing and ask for more. It's written by a talented young author who really did her best to write, find an editor, commission cover, etc. Let's support this author and hope for the best. Well Done Author

Raj_Shah_7152
Raj_Shah_7152Lv14Raj_Shah_7152

A fresh take on an overly explored VRMMO genre . Very little information about the world as of now , but I'm sure that it will be very interesting . ( Review at chapter 17 ) Positives : 1) Solid grammar 2) Interesting world premise 3) No dumb clichès Hopefully the author shifts gears and zooms into a super story 😄😄

Drew_Paroz
Drew_ParozLv2Drew_Paroz

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Missrealitybites
MissrealitybitesLv14Missrealitybites

I read the early chapters of this novel a month ago and immediately drawn in. The premise is very promising as it explores humans desire for a second chance after life for their loved ones and themselves. I am so happy Sabet has finally published the story here on Webnovel. I can't wait to keep reading more. Writing quality = 5 stars. For a newbie author, this is very impressive. Story development = 5 stars so far. I've read all available chapters and really like how it's progressing. We get information on the game slowly but in a good pace with enough mystery to keep us guessing. Good flow and pacing. Character design = 5 stars for now. Only saw a few characters so far but they are well thought lot and relatable. Updating stability = 5 stars. One chapter per day now, though I predict it's going to be more once the book is contracted. World background = solid five stars for the one I've seen so far. Can't wait to read more.

JayFireblood
JayFirebloodLv15JayFireblood

Of writing this I'm at chapter 110 so far I'm enjoying the series but there's a few problems with the book. For starters is it's hard to tell if they really playing a game, people don't say the right things and finally their isn't a base of the game to give us a idea what is and what isn't capable

RaizarP
RaizarPLv11RaizarP

I like this fiction so far. It's solid. Character development is decent, story development is decent. I really think that this is a good foundation for continuing forward. Importantly, the main character stands out as vibrant and interesting. First, the narrative is ok. It follows a straight line of progress and in the first 10k written it did not deviate. Second, since it is a system-based world, expect the blue window and a lot of notification. I am looking forward to how the story pans out.

Ogi_Saga
Ogi_SagaLv11Ogi_Saga

WORTH TO ADD! I give five stars for this story because this story deserves it. At the beginning of the story, Hiro appears as an annoying little brother and I hate him but I also like him 😭 The author managed to make the characters very well that's why i like this story. I also really like the world background, reminds me of Sao, by Reki Kawahara. love it 100%

Chocolo
ChocoloLv3Chocolo

This novel has a good plot development and every chara is pretty interesting. It is easy to read and catch up to, so refreshing; nice to fill the free time. But one thing that misses in this novel... why u didn't put a "comedy" tag, author? I laugh several times srsly hahaha LIBE IS SO CUTE AND HER ACTION TO HIRO KILLS ME 🤣🤣

Thesilverderp
ThesilverderpLv13Thesilverderp

Is it harem or no? B--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------->

WhyNotBacon
WhyNotBaconLv14WhyNotBacon

I read all the way up to when the chapters started to get locked and then a couple more with the passes. It's a very good story and I would recommend it, but sadly I refuse to give money to webnovel. If the Author had a Patreon and I could read the chapters that way I would do it but sadly not.

KingGoldfish
KingGoldfishLv11KingGoldfish

I'm not usually a fan of game-themed, stories, but... At first, I thought that Hiro (the MC) was an annoying entitled brat, but I found that's not the case. Rather, after I noticed why he was like that in the beginning, I sympathized with him a little. Futher into the story, I actually found Hiro to be rather cool and lovable at the same time. It feels weird to use those two different words to describe one person, but that's just how it is. Thank everything holy the MC doesn't have a 1D personality. The story development is solid. Not too fast, but not too slow and dragged out either. The world background is built at a nice pace instead of just thrown at the readers with a bunch of info dump, which is something I really appreciate. All in all, a fun read to pass time! If you're looking for a fun, light read, try this story out!

IwantMeat
IwantMeatLv10IwantMeat

very good novel. well written. definetly a must read. very much recommended. Author we need more chapters, more chapters, more chapters.thank you

anna_kanina
anna_kaninaLv1anna_kanina

I rarely enjoy reading Game / System' novel. But this story' is an exception for me. It's beautifully writen, fast paced but not too fast, and the flow is balanced. I really enjoyed it. good job author, keep the good work!

mrant12
mrant12Lv2mrant12

Interesting start, very well done! Can't wait to read more chapters, keep up the very good work and all the very best for WSA 2022 hope you do well :)

Ryan_Saga
Ryan_SagaLv13Ryan_Saga

This one give me fresh vibe to Gaming genre. Written beautifully with interesting plot and lot mysteries Yeah, but anyway! I need more Hiro x Liberty, she is just soo Cute!

Stormeyy
StormeyyLv14Stormeyy

Stopped reading around Chp 165 This book is pretty interesting. I was actually hooked for a little bit but there are some cons that really disrupt the experience for me. The main thing is that the mysteries are a bit exasperating. The mysteries keep building at the worst times; some people may not mind this but i find it a bit annoying because it interupts my understanding of the MC and his emotions or gives me the impression that hes overly emotional or weak willed. Most of the time when the weird random stuff happen, he doesnt give it too much thought or tries to analyze things intricately. Personally, i just felt he could do a lot more. Overall, your story premise is very good and entertaining. Ive been enjoying the story so far. One thing i would like to add to improve the story is to make the MC more focused, analytical, relentless and less clueless in finding out what really happened to his brother. Lastly, you should tone down the mystery and randomness of the events or increase the time interval between them. We need more of the MMORPG feel and less of the Murder mystery feel.

Ideabadar
IdeabadarLv1Ideabadar

Congratulations and keep up the good work, I always support you. The novel game this time is cool, it feels like we are playing the game ourselves, continue. level up.

Gigi_Saga
Gigi_SagaLv11Gigi_Saga

I've never read a game novel before. But after finding this jewel, i can say the plot is very intriguing with interesting character. Hiro is the first MC in male lead story that i liked!

Wage_saga
Wage_sagaLv11Wage_saga

So far so good. The protagonist reminds me of the classic mc manga and anime. I want to see how the protagonist develops further. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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