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KARNA A DIFFERENT STORY

A boy from Kaliyuga reborn in parallel universe Dwaparyuga as Suryaputra'Karna'. How he manage his life? Is he following same path as history?, Or he is going to take different part in the story. How much story will change from his interventions? Will he abale to find home there? How he abale to able to archive his goals? This is a different version of Mahabharat. A 'Karna' perspective story about 'Mahabharat'. His journey, struggle, suffering, IF SOMEONE CAN FIND FAULT IN BASIC INFORMATION ABOUT MAHABHARAT THEN PLEASE COMMENT AND POINT IT OUT. (This is based on 'Mahabharat' and unsung hero 'Karna'. This story is quite different from original story, please don't get offended by this story. If someone gets offended by this story then, I am very sorry for offending you, if possible please forgive me.)

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Chapter 20. Rudra.

Karna' is coming from investigation of Raja Vinay'. He is moving with a Strom, like Suryadev' is sad for the pain which will rain upon Karna'. Suryadev' is hiding behind the clouds.

In Gokul' Krishna is playing flute for Radha, suddenly Krishna stopped playing and looked up the sky with sad face.

Radha understanding the mood of Krishna,asked Krishna," What happened Priya? You look sad."

Krishna sighed as said ," Nothing priye, someone has lost a part of his soul, A father is sad about the pain his son will go through."

Radha looked at him with Puzzle and said, " what are you talking about? "

Krishna seeing Radha's reaction brust into laughter, " Ha ha ha ha... Priye it's nothing, to worry about, what has happened it cannot be changed, but our present action determine the future."

Then he happily strated playing flute.

Other side..

Karna' speed up his house, his instinct is screaming that something is going to happen, but he has no idea.

When he reachd the village he noticed the grim atmosphere. He left his horse started running towards the village. He didn't see anyone on the outside, he started to find what happened here and there, when he reached village square, by seeing the seane he rooted on the place, he dropped on his knees with ' thud'. Rain started at the same time Karna's tear fall, as if God is hiding the vulnerable side of Worrior.

On the stage Shon' is still tied gold is coming out from mouth, eyes, ears, and nose. And his family is hung on the display to show the consequences of the action.

Karna' is on his knees looking up to the sky, his tears and rain is mixing and falling on the ground. His heart is braking in millions of pieces, But there is nothing in his mind, he has just regret why didn't he stayed for a day when Shon' asked for. If he stayed he would have saved them, he looked at Janvi', his face distorted in pain, like he lost a part of his soul.

She was a very sweet girl, she helped everyone, she had fallen in love with him he knows that, tha way she looked at him says all the stories. But now she is now on the stage, a white flower has became red in blood.

Karna' knows about she loved him, but he doesn't respond to her wish because, he has too much responsibility, he liked her but he also feel connected to her but, he doesn't have the courage to take last step. He doesn't know what the emotion was it's very new to him, he felt pain, betrayal, injustice, mother's love, father's love, he has never felt warmth, love like never before. He countless times lost to her eyes, her warm smile has captivated him like never before.

He walks towards the execution stand, his footsteps are abnormally heavy today, like a mountain pressing on his shoulders. He picked one by one everyone, and arranged for the funeral, when he picked Shon' he felt his heart is braking, he set his hair picked up and walked towards the river bank.

When Karna' picked Janvi' up he couldn't control himself anymore, warmth of her body is gone, only remain cold emotionless corpse. He picked her up walked towards the river bank, he shoote her hair kissed her on the forehead and place her on the 'chita'( Hindu funeral ritual ). He lit up the 'chita' to give last right to them.

He prayed to all Gods for rest of their soul.

He sat there at watched all the burning 'chita'. He remembered the time with Shon' whom he accepted as a brother. His laughter, his pranks, all of them came to his mind, he remembered how he met Janvi' first time.

Few months ago...

Shon' is practicing near the river bank. At the evening when karna returning from helping around neighbourhood, he was thirsty, he looked at his gourd bottle, but there was not a single drop water left. Suddenly a beautiful girl around Karna's age came and offered him water. He was memorized by her eyes. He lost himself in her eyes. He joined his hand to drink water, he looking at her eyes like a fool. And she poured the water on his hand, while looking at his eyes. She had a smile on her face. Her smile like first Ray of sun which lands on the sunflowers.She is like first light in the morning which symbolise new beginning after dreadful night. He is the Dark Knight who consumed by darkness, she is like incarnation of light who came to end his darkness.

That water was the most pure water he has drank in his entire life. Like he is drinking 'Amrit'.

Karna' remembering that he chuckled himself, now he felt what he has lost, his heart ached in pain, uncontrollable urge to run towards her 'chita' comes to his mind. He bear his pain he sited rooted in his place. He felt uncontrollable urge to sleep. His eyes gave up on himself. He felt a air blowes from Janvi's 'chita', like saying goodbye to her beloved. Karna's closed eyes sead a single drop of tear.

In the morning first Ray of sun fall upon Karna'. He suddenly shot open his eyes. He looked hear and there. And his eyes landed on four pile of ashes. His heart ached in pain. He got up and packed four pairs of clay pot and picked four pile of ashes. His eyes shown in determination. He has to do something about this society. He vowed to fulfill the dream of his brother Shon'. But first he has to complete the account which other side left open. An uncontrolled rage swell upon his eyes his face distorted in rage.

Like Mahadev's 'Rudha' roop.

He walked towards his horse. He put on his cape, he hide his face he packed all of his equipment he sharpened All of his weapons. It's time for Karna's 'Rudra' roop.

He took all of his belongings and goes towards the capital, he reach there at the evening. After eating something outside the Capital. He left his horse in secure place. He waited for night.

Karna' sneaked inside the capital, he searched all of the capital he didn't find abnormalities that much. He found 3 corrpted official, he disposed them. Silently, In their sleep. He searched there mansions he found celler where children, girls and women are bound in chains they torchered and raped. He felt pity for them he sneek and freed them but all of them have no soul left they had no desire to live. They stayed in the cell, women commited suicide in front of him, they only had gratitude for freeing. Seeing all of this he felt sadness, rage, and pain he took his time and prayed for their souls to Mahadev'.

He sneaked inside of the castle and searched every corner but he didn't find Raja Vinay'. He got out of the palace and searched all the surroundings of the palace. He didn't find nothing.

When he thought of leaving he felt movement underground. He searched entrance to the underground from some distance he found a heavily guarded natural underground cave entrance .

He shot dart on one by one. Those dart heavily poisoned by paralysing and sleeping poison. It took action within 1 second. Make them fall asleep. He got inside the cave stealthily. He saw they modified it and make it a underground palace. He felt bad vives from this place. He open the door and slipped inside. He searched all the rooms, he found it empty, he found the dungeon and found dead body of women and girls. They looked like they have no blood left.He ruched towards the main chember.

He took a deep breath and he sneaked inside , he saw Raja Vinay' high. He is raping a woman and drinking her blood by biteing the throat of the woman, he has no knowledge of his surroundings. He is engrossed in his canniblastic desire.

Karna' looked all of it in rage. In feet of rage he draws his sword and with a single strike he bhade the demon in human skin, Raja Vinay's head roal on the floor. Blood sprayed on the wall.