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I Can Copy Curses

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WPC APRIL WINNER 2024 Orion had worked hard his whole life, but success always eluded him. He couldn’t cross the threshold that required him to and got plunged into the abyss of despair because of it. However, life gave everyone a second chance. Orion also got one, and he put his soul and sweat on it, but he still failed to grasp that chance. As a result, he died. But when he thought it was all over for him, he found himself reincarnated in the world of fantasy, where every individual boasted super talents and devastating curses on themselves. He also had a talent, but he didn’t know what to make of it as his talent was “Copy Curse.” He could only copy other people’s curses. “Why? Why, god, why? Why do you have to reincarnate me and give me this shitty talent?” As if God had heard his plea, something appeared in his field of vision. [Congratulation to the host for awakening the system.] [Talent: Copy Curse — Host can copy other people’s curses.] [Curse: Null Body — Host’s body can’t feel mana because of this body.] “What the hell! My talent is already shit, but this freaking curse has to make things worse for me.” However, what Orion didn’t know was that, with the crazy combination of his talent and curse, he had the ability to become the strongest being in the three domains. Discord Link: https://discord.gg/kh8Xwe6WHV For character arts and many more things, join the novel discord group.

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Chapter 11. It's never too late

'It's never too late.'

The saying was firmly established in the beliefs of all, unanimously agreed upon without any doubt.

It provided a source of hope for those who had stumbled, those who had not yet reached their goals, and those in search of meaning in their lives.

Because it was a fact: there is always the opportunity to chase after one's dreams—no matter what they are. Just one first step was needed to start a series of events that would bring everything together, leading to eventual success.

That was the shared conviction.

That's what Orion used to believe in, at least.

***

In a room of a ten-story building, a bed was placed with its bed sheets tucked in a corner.

A messy table was close by, its top covered with a disorganized mix of books, some open, others piled randomly, each narrating a different tale.

Nevertheless, it was the floor that really drew the eye. Littered all over it like fallen leaves were empty chip packets and crumpled snack wrappers, indicating the occupant's indulgence or possible distraction.

A man in his thirties sat at the opposite side of the room, his face depicting worry as he focused closely on the computer screen in front of him.

His hair was plain black, uncombed, and he had faint dark circles under his eyes, showing he was tired from the current pressures.

Completely absorbed in what he was doing, his fingers moved swiftly over the keys, filling the room with the rhythmic sound of typing.

After a while, he paused, his gaze fixated on the monitor before him, his mind fully absorbed in the task at hand.

"The cut-off marks have finally arrived."

He was drawn to the screen by the link leading to the page containing the list of passing exam candidates and cut-off marks.

As he hesitated and hovered over the link to the exam results, he felt a surge of emotions.

It wasn't the fear of not succeeding that prevented him from moving forward, but a much more sinister anticipation.

This was Orion's last chance for redemption—his final opportunity. One more failure would signal the conclusion of his journey, determining his destiny in a manner he feared to consider.

A 30-year-old man was unable to keep taking exams, signaling the start of his problems. His family's savings were all used up after a tragic accident, leaving him with zero funds.

In addition to his troubles, he had taken a loan from the landowner to pay for his exam expenses. If he did not succeed this time, the repercussions would be much worse than just failing academically.

"I can't run away from this. I have to check it sooner or later anyway. So, let's do it now."

When he found the courage to click the link, his heart pounded in his chest with the fear of the unknown. The screen came on, showing the harsh truth of what was to come, with his name noticeably missing from the list.

Observing the cut-off marks, Orion experienced a sudden shock that ran through his entire body. He was shocked and couldn't believe his eyes when he saw the number: 350.

He was struck by a bitter realization when he saw the cruel irony of his fate. His score, just one point below the necessary cut-off, taunted him on the screen: 349.

A single mark separated him from being saved, a barrier that appeared impossible to overcome and destined him to a fate worse than failure.

In that instant, he discovered himself standing at the entrance of hopelessness while contemplating the repercussions of his failure spreading out like fragments of shattered glass. Every shattered hope pierced him more deeply each time, leaving him vulnerable to the unpredictable winds of uncertainty.

At that moment, Orion's heart started to beat faster. With every passing second, its speed increased, causing a low thumping sound all around him. However, he appeared to be unaware of it as he wallowed in his despair.

"Thump!"

"It's just one mark."

"Thump!" "Thump!"

"IT'S JUST ONE MARK!"

"Thump!" "Thump!" "Thump!"

"Why? Why am I so unlucky?"

"Thump!" "Thump!" "Thump!" "Thump!"

"WHY?! I worked hard for years, and I still didn't pass. Why?!"

"Thump!" "Thump!" "Thump!" "Thump!"

"Why?"

He yelled at his fate—his incompetence. He had tried so hard, come so far that losing here would mean everything he had done would turn into nothing but waste.

"Thump!" "Thump!" "Thump!" "Thump!" "Thump!" "Thump!"

"My heart?! Why is it so fast? I can hear the sound of its beating."

"Thump!" "Thump!" "Thump!" "Thump!" "Thump!" "Thump!"

"But why is—"

Orion's voice got stuck in his throat, his sentence left hanging as an intense pain tore through his chest. With one last, painful breath, his heart, already beating rapidly, succumbed to the intense pressure.

Suddenly, everything around him turned into a red blur as blood flowed from his broken heart, gathering in a grim scene of closure.

His head bowed down onto the desk while the remaining shreds of awareness faded away, enveloped by encroaching darkness.

Orion's journey was abruptly and prematurely cut short in that tragic moment, leaving only the resounding silence of his unfulfilled dreams.

***

"What happened?"

A scream sounded in a quiet and gloomy place.

The cry came from a teenage boy of fifteen, with messy black hair and a dusty face. His garments looked like they hadn't been cleaned in a while, and he had the overall look of a beggar.

'Where am I? I was just thinking about why my heartbeat increased so fast, and suddenly I am here.'

The kid, or rather Orion, pondered his situation. As he surveyed his surroundings, he was struck by an even more shocking sight.

Fourteen kids, ranging from fifteen to twenty years old, surrounded him in a comparable situation. The cruelest part was that they were all chained, with their hands and legs bound, and attached to a wall.

"What is this place?"

The children responded to his question by remaining silent and staring at him strangely, giving no answer.

Ignoring them, Orion tried to stand up from his seat but soon discovered he couldn't. Attempting to rise, he faced the sound of chains clinking in response to his unseen struggles.

Puzzled, he looked down and suddenly realized his situation was similar to the other children, all trapped here by the same chains.

However, what really surprised him was not the incident itself, but rather the fact that he was also a child like them.

'I am a kid! How is this possible?'

The revelation shocked him and yet another thought soon crossed his mind.

'Have I transmigrated into this kid?'

This was the only scenario in which he could imagine himself reverting to a childlike state.

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"Level up? Dragons?" Eighteen. The age of Awakening. An important moment where every human in the desolate maga-cities unlocks their Talent, a unique ability to carve a path in this monster-plagued apocalyptic world. Alister Hazenworth, a graduating student, and a rising star at the prestigious Aegis Academy, was destined for greatness. His exceptional athleticism and magical aptitude promise a powerful Talent – a guarantee for a secure life and social status. But fate had different plans. During Alister's Awakening ceremony, it's revealed that he's a Summoner. Instead of admiration, he faces mockery. His once bright future turns bleak as his "friends" desert him for Talents they see as more "useful." left alone, Alister awakens a system. [Host found, system binding...] [System binded successfully.] [Congrats, you have gain the status of 'player'.] [Ding!! Congrats to the player for awakening The Dragonforge - an overlord system.] [Ding!! it has been detected that the player possesses a latent draconic aspect, and as such will only be able to summon dragons!!] [Will the player like to proceed with their first summoning?] Cast aside and underestimated, Alister becomes a force to be reckoned with. He embarks on a journey, building his own dragon army – a crew of majestic wyverns, fearsome drakes, and ancient wyrms. He raids the wastelands, reclaims lost resources, and dismantles the prejudice against summoners. Every day, his power grows, his bond with his dragons deepens, and his legend spreads like wildfire. Discord server: https://discord.gg/zbQwWCSCrn [A/N: This is a slow paced novel, don't expect the protagonist to suddenly start out overpowered and start dominating left and right, he will become an overlord of dragons, yes, but it will take time. (⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)] Cover made by me /⁠ᐠ⁠。⁠ꞈ⁠。⁠ᐟ⁠\

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The author ShinGotLost will make you lost too with his first novel. Jokes aside, it's an admirable attempt at a first novel. However, too often I struggled to follow the story’s logic. The story also feels under-planned resulting in pacing issues. The story’s beginning attempts to give the readers whiplash with its multiple setting shifts. Characters feel flat. Interactions and dialog could use more consideration. As for the technical execution of the writing (grammar) — Proofreading software seems to have been applied properly and the flow of words is decent. But, there is some awkward phrasing. Overall it's decent enough. The release schedule is heroic — a testament to the author's resolve to tell an epic tale. The very existence of this lengthy review is another sign that the author has potential.   From here onward the more specific and rambly critique will require some spoilers, but I will endeavor to keep to generalizations: The beginning has readers flung all over the place. Before we can grasp the major revelations five more appear to make it feel irrelevant. Consider carefully, Is it necessary to use all these shiny plot points together? Taking them out slowly allows for time to make them brilliant. Perhaps, hold the rest in reserve and gradually release them.  A hundred chapters in, major limitations appear from nowhere that should have been hinted at better earlier in the story. Immediately after, those same limitations felt irrelevant because they arrived too late.  There’s a plethora of side characters with the potential to break the balance of the world. Yet they also seem irrelevant because we don’t focus on them much and the MC’s aspects already obliterated the balance of the world from the start. The MC’s one real weakness was his lack of knowledge but this handicap was auto-removed by simply being given the knowledge when he breaks a bottleneck. We have no indication the other transmigrators have any knowledge. Why is the MC so special? Also, did the MC need a divine-like fate on top of it all? (Yeah I know the chicken or the egg prophecy fate argument supports this but it's cringy.)   Character motivations, plot points, and the setting need a more detailed explanation. The readers expect the characters to pursue rewards and strength. However, the MC often ignores opportunities for extremely weak or unexplained reasons. For example, the MC abandons several opportunities because he can’t think of a way to do it without seeming awkward, weird, or suspicious. Frankly, the people around him that might notice mostly don’t matter and also have no way of knowing what the MC is doing. In the end, the reader is left thinking the author lazily forced the decision for the convenience of the plot.  The interactions between the characters are forced and awkward. Some characters will dislike the MC for no reason. Some will dislike him for a reason but grow out of it without actively interacting with the MC. Distrust and trust feel like they appear and disappear too easily.  Lastly, I will disclose that I’m not a fan of useless but diligent MCs given the key to godhood-type stories which this seems to be. Therefore, the story is going to need some compelling plot points and character relationships for me to continue much longer. Shin Got Lost trying to do too much too quickly. Perhaps, Shin could make a map. However, Shin shouldn’t get lost by focusing too much on the map, so the story isn’t forced onward without sound logic. Goodluck ShinGotLost! We want a story we can lose ourselves in.

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