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FLOCK OF JUSTICE

Penulis: ihatepower_45
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What is FLOCK OF JUSTICE

Baca novel FLOCK OF JUSTICE yang ditulis oleh penulis ihatepower_45 yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. we follow the story of a adventurer group that goes by the name Flock. Watch as they travel around the world accepting jobs and battle their past....

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we follow the story of a adventurer group that goes by the name Flock. Watch as they travel around the world accepting jobs and battle their past.

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GOT: The Golden Baratheon

Our Mc, Martin McFly is a 27-year-old Filipino-American, who had a standard life of living was killed in an unfortunate circumstance (Nope, not really) and, due to some luck, he was given another chance by God(?) "to at least experience a fulfilling life". Let's see if he will be able to achieve his goal or if fate will f*ck him all over again.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  MC will be reincarnated in "Game of Thrones" as a member of house Baratheon (he won't be a son robert, btw.) with little knowledge about the series (that includes ASOIAF). How will he be able to utilize his knowledge about the future and will he be able to differentiate fiction from reality?  ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A/N : Hey peeps, this is my first time writing and I'm quite sure that my skills are amateurish at best, so hopefully you will point out sometl things that I might have overlooked. And also, English is not my first language, but I will try to make this readable as much as I can. The reason the MC has little knowledge is because of me. It's been quite a while since I read GOT, so there might be some confusions with the general information in the story, so I'm shamelessly announce that this story is an AU. Any correction, suggestion, and criticism will be highly appreciated. The first chapter has 2.9K words, thus I will try to make the same lenght for the following chapters. p.s i don't own Game of Thrones aside from my O.C

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! 😉

Tolinie_Williams_4092
Tolinie_Williams_4092Lv1Tolinie_Williams_4092

Fantastic work by the author. I hope they will continue on this wonderful journey as a author. The only true issue I have is the fact that the story is too slow. Otherwise keep it up

ihatepower_45
ihatepower_45Penulisihatepower_45

shameless author he reviewing my work with five star. Is this truly worth a five, no but I hope I can make it worth a ten out of five stars.

Mollysun
MollysunLv1Mollysun

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SEP1A
SEP1ALv10SEP1A

This is an explosive story with action everywhere you turn! Unravelling every step you take, the author has magnificently constructed a castle of a tale that spirals into the clouds. Great work!

A_lucid_Dreamer
A_lucid_DreamerLv11A_lucid_Dreamer

So far I think Story is Very likeable. I Like the characters relationship between leo puppatier. All the characters of the FloCk are orginal. OnlY thinG thaT needs tO be added is More workD building.

_hestia_
_hestia_Lv2_hestia_

very pretty cover. The flow of dialogue is smooth, and the authors control over the characters in enviable. I do feel like the synopsis could have been more detailed

ghjgyugf
ghjgyugfLv1ghjgyugf

I loved the fantasy-magical theme of the novel the imagination of the writter is wide and Amazing the flow of story was good but there were few Petty mistakes breaking the flaw of the novel like - punctuation mistakes, typography, grammatical errors but if the author works on these things nothing can stop this novel from rocking on. a little cheer up dance for my author best of luck

Aevitas
AevitasLv11Aevitas

It has an interesting premise with the mc being a deal with the devil type character. The cover art looks amazing as well. The only problem I had with it was the grammar making it a bit hard to read.

ArnolDadi
ArnolDadiLv3ArnolDadi

Impressed by the way, the author put the tory together. Although there are grammatical errors, it's passable and everything else flows smoothly. [img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Nullabutton
NullabuttonLv3Nullabutton

This reads very much like a screenplay. I'd like to see author expands and add more than actions and dialogues. Plot is intriguing and characters are interesting enough. The battle scene is exciting. Epic, I dare say. The story's got a huge potential. So, a bit more muscle on the bone, and this would rake in stars and readers.

silent_walker
silent_walkerLv3silent_walker

I can see that the author tried his best to make it epic. There's nice worldbuilding, though I would like it if you stretched that more. The main problem is stretching... your story looked too easy... stretch it, make ot more difficult and make it as believable as possible. There are quite a few grammatical errors... you should solve them asap, especially the punctuations. The writing style is easy on the eye with a bit of fixing it would be even more promising... Good luck... Author.

meixiaolian
meixiaolianLv2meixiaolian

Join the FLOCK group! Synopsis is great, short but intriguing. Like how the author name the characters, the world building is great too. The author's narration is great to let the readers imagine the setting. Haven't across a novel that is has a lot of adventures. Give this book a try.

JustLikeWriting777
JustLikeWriting777Lv1JustLikeWriting777

Read the first chapters and i am intrigued- the writer did an excellent job to get a reader hooked right into the story. The plot caught my eye and I am curious about the main characters. I think this was a great read!

Sonder_Ella
Sonder_EllaLv2Sonder_Ella

I jumped into this with no expectations, and was greatly surprised honestly. It's a very intriguing start for the story, and I'm more than curious to read what happens next. Honestly, AMAZING job!!

kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3kuhaku_sora

At the start, I felt like there is a mentor kind of relationship with Hades and la puppeteer! If you could pull it off, this would be epic! Although there are few grammatical writings from here and there, one sweep of editting will make the entire novel at its finest! Kudos for the author!

Maryixxx
MaryixxxLv4Maryixxx

I like the Author's writing style, the storyline is not the same as what readers usually read . This one is the best novel I have read so far. Keep up the great work, Author.

Jaheim_Williams_6977
Jaheim_Williams_6977Lv1Jaheim_Williams_6977

This could be improved especially on the grammar, world building and character end but I'm willing to give the author 5 stars to support his/her work.

AE_Tonni_Music
AE_Tonni_MusicLv1AE_Tonni_Music

This story caught my attention with the mis match of characters but somehow they work together. I like the references that are scattered across the chapters and the jokes that are hidden underneath. Just fix the Grammer and puntuation issue and this will be 😌

Drefinity
DrefinityLv1Drefinity

I like this story and its characters, the description of the world could use some work, but otherwise from that this story is pretty good in my opinion. Thumbs up to you author.

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