Fate's Bloody Path

This novel is really nice. I got hooked from the first two chapters, although novels using the first-person pronoun isn't really my style but I guess there can be exceptions. I hope the book doesn't get dropped halfway like others

Im not gonna overreact but i really love how he portrays the world and how the storytelling is so smooth i love it as I'm also creating my first novel it was also really helpful..

My friend, no matter what, I will support you. You’ve got this! My friend, no matter what, I will support you. You’ve got this! My friend, no matter what, I will support you. You’ve got this!

I like the concept and the author seems to know how to make his word impactful. looking forward to seeing how the story goes

This book is a stunning nine out of ten. But i would have appreciated a more picturesque explanation of the civilized world he ended up in to help my imagination. Nevertheless it’s still a very good book

I loved it from the first three chapters, the Author is very good at using words that are easy to understand with neat grammar, even though this story uses the first person POV. I also like the concept of time travel that has its own consequences, it makes the MC more cautious and has its own wisdom. Worldbuilding is explained in quite detail, maybe you can add significant differences from one era to another so that readers are not confused, this book has great potential to develop further.

this book is so interesting and captivating. although i haven't gone far in the book, but just based on the little chapters i read, i know this book is amazing. the description is top notch. but this protagonist is quite impulsive and doesn't think rationally before he does something. how could you just barge in on Grimnor like that? anyway good job author

overall I'm enjoying the story and the jumping through different eras is a concept I never thought of until I read this. the first early chapters gave me Re:Zero vibs so that could explain why I like it. overall 10/10

I really like the depth of your story. I also love the path you took with it. It's an interesting world build and anyone would never get bored of reading. Good work!

kudos to the author. I read a few chapters and it's very impressive, keep it up👍

So here's what I thought of this book. The story is indeed interesting and unique. Yet the main concept introduced in the synopsis about finding the MC's love at different times shows a bit of a long story in progress. It is barely at the story so far yet. Also, the writing quality is good but it sometimes just goes too narrative or descriptive like it feels to me that it's going over the top to explain some normal event. Also, the POV is in first person which is kinda of a challenge for controlling the sequence of events in the story but it's also enjoyable to read a first person narration. I think the foundation of the story still needs some improvement so keep working and writing, author.

Story is very well written and is very immersive. Just remember, that there is always room for improvement. And, as long as you yourself enjoy writing the story, then that is the thing that should matter the most. Keep at it, as you are very much on the right path to success with this story.

Since there are only a few chapters released yet, giving a proper review is hard. However, those few chapters only are enough to display the overwhelming potential that this novel promises. Writing is better than most and narration is even better. Charcters are fleshed out and realistic, till now I don't see any problem.

green heart for the story 💚💚💚, will be expecting more 🤭

While the prologue is short, the other chapters are longer and more enjoyable. It has a good pace, the plot is interesting and I look forward to seeing how it will develop in the future.

The starting was full of cliffhangers which will definitely be unfolded later one. It's still early to talk about world building but what happened so far is interesting. This story seems a bit different than normal reincarnation as it hints at resurrection like situation with mc also having multiple chances at it. I have only a bit of issue on the writing but I'm sure it will improve. The novel is showing potential. Hope it gets better.

So far it's interesting, I hope it improves ^.^

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The writting style is immersive and the POV is perfect, I found myself literally visualisningthe scenes as I read ! which is the best part of this amazing work!. I highly recommend this novel guys you need to try it !