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Exposing One Piece with QnA

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Luke gotten himsel Isekai'd to the One Piece World But instead of waking up in an island surrounded by water, or in a ship... Luke found himself in the Moon, and he was seal in the moon To be unseal Luke need to change the Canon Plot with the help of a QnA System So he expose the story of One Piece with a QnA, to try and free himself... Read ahead only on https://www.patreon.com/goldengaruda

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Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

A man from an Earth gets the choice to start over in any Universe and chooses an Alternate Pokemon Universe. Let us see if his journey to the top is succesful and the impact he will have on his new world. Pokemon is owned by Nintendo, Game Freak and Creatures Inc. I just use their sandbox for the plot of my MC and my OCs. This will be a "slow" paced story, in fact it's "super slow paced", so please don't expect the MC to directly start his journey in 20 chapters or so, actually multiply that by like 15. A lot is going to happen before that happens. The first 10-20 chapters or so are information heavy, depending on what kind of reader you are. I try to keep my chapter length between 2000 and 3000 words per chapter. My release rate is 4 chapter/week for now. I have a patre*n for those that want to support me with access to some advance chapters as a thank you. patre*n.com/Azrail93 This is an alternate pokemon universe so there will be differences to the games, manga and anime. So if something in the story is different it is most likely on purpose. The original sources are seen as suggestions not laws. Differences can be: Type variants, evolution conditions, strength mechanics, world building and more. If I am at some point asking for reader input I will do so but otherwise I will ignore most suggestions. So please don't spam things like catch this pokemon or do that next. I have my plot planned and external input will be considered when asked for. If I see a suggestion that I believe fit my plot flow I will use it and will credit the commentor. Comments on spelling and grammar mistakes are welcome. I will try to correct said mistakes with time. Constructive criticism will be read and considered. Insult and hate comments will be ignored or deleted depending on severity. Readers naturally can comment their dislike but one worders will be ignored. If the reason for the dislike is explained I will read it. Like previously mentioned pure insults and hate comments will be ignored or deleted. The same is true for simple hate reviews or insulting ones. Reviews complaining about something I warned about, such as the slow pace, will be deleted as well.

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Its a translated piece, which makes it already pretty annoying to read through. They read like Xianxia face slap novels most of the time and sayings don't translate well cause we don't have the same context. When someone says "my love for you is deeper than the deepest ocean", everyone who has played super mario odyssey knows. However when someone sees, "A broken lotus root is connected by its strings", no one is getting that except for the Chinese. (I looked up chinese sayings lol). On another note, the general concept of QNAs has been used before, making this concept unoriginal. That is not bad in and of itself but it means for people who have consumed content like this will likely either like it more if they enjoyed the content they previously watched, or will hate it if they disliked the content they previously watched. This is called bias lol. Its not really a point for or against the story, more a warning I guess. The story starting with the main character starting on the moon is not new, but rare enough that its refreshing. The system that the main character gets is no real surprise given the title. The whole "the world has rejected me" thing is not entirely new along with the having to unseal himself thing. Pretty rare outside the nasuverse and naruto verse though. Everything else is pretty generic though. Lots of wows, helpless anger, malding old men, gratitude for exposing stuff, characters frequently disappearing into the background, etc. It does go into lore every now and again though so there is that.

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