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2024-10-26 10:08

Its a translated piece, which makes it already pretty annoying to read through. They read like Xianxia face slap novels most of the time and sayings don't translate well cause we don't have the same context. When someone says "my love for you is deeper than the deepest ocean", everyone who has played super mario odyssey knows. However when someone sees, "A broken lotus root is connected by its strings", no one is getting that except for the Chinese. (I looked up chinese sayings lol). On another note, the general concept of QNAs has been used before, making this concept unoriginal. That is not bad in and of itself but it means for people who have consumed content like this will likely either like it more if they enjoyed the content they previously watched, or will hate it if they disliked the content they previously watched. This is called bias lol. Its not really a point for or against the story, more a warning I guess. The story starting with the main character starting on the moon is not new, but rare enough that its refreshing. The system that the main character gets is no real surprise given the title. The whole "the world has rejected me" thing is not entirely new along with the having to unseal himself thing. Pretty rare outside the nasuverse and naruto verse though. Everything else is pretty generic though. Lots of wows, helpless anger, malding old men, gratitude for exposing stuff, characters frequently disappearing into the background, etc. It does go into lore every now and again though so there is that.

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