webnovel

Dragon ball R

Dylan a 17 year old gets killed after playing DBXV2 on his brand new "PS5" that he got for his birthday and gets reincarnated as the brother of Goku. The Saiyan name of the MC is Kuruma/kurma (it's a soup of vegetables). The story start from the birth of the MC and Goku and will be almost the same as the original story with some change since the MC isn't in the original story but the story will really start to change at the start of DBZ when Raditz come to earth. also some chapter are short at the start (average of 600 words) they become longer after the 20 first chapters (average of 1000 to 1500 words but can be of 2000 words) [The cover is mine. English is not my first language and not even my second since i know French, Dutch, German, and Wallon (old Belgian language) and English (Yeah i speak 5 languages but it's hard so if there is grammatical error in the story just tell me and i will correct it)]

Dark_encheanced01 · Komik
Peringkat tidak cukup
25 Chs

Taopaipai

[hello everyone i lost my phone so i couldn't post any chapter and had to lock all my accounts so as to not lose anything, but i had to get a new one and fortunately i write on the app so even if i change phone i still have them so don't the story continue.

Also for an unknown reason i can't do a paragraph comment on my phone and i tried with all the story i read on the app i even deleted and reinstalled the app but it still don't work so from now on if i have to post an image i will post it in the chapter comment instead of the paragraph comment (i don't know if that's the same on PC)

Also i watched on the internet and it's really is Karin and not Korin even in english (screenshot in the comment)

also how do you call it when you write in third person ? (World POV or 3rd POV ?)

Anyway Good chapter to you all !]

I also saw a door frame with stairs and when i took them i was in the middle of the big ball that this place is but it's cut in the middle and the upper half is with pillars all around the middle of it.

[Image in the comments]

Then i saw a cat who had a stick all old wise guys have 'So that's Karin ? He look so cute ! I want to take his cheeks and play with them !'

He looked at me and said "Good job making it all the way up here. And you're the first that did it at that speed !" Before continuing "Now i suppose you're here for th...."

I interrupted him and said "No, i am just waiting for Goku ! So if you don't mind i'll watch the fight from here !"

Karin was dumbfounded by my response and i leaned on a pillar and watched what was happening below.

[World POV]

A guy was flying on a pillar to the base of the tower where Goku and Bora were but they narrowly dodged it.

"Wh-Who are you ?!" Bora asked the stranger.

"The greatest assassin in the world, Taopaipai !" The stranger replied with confidence.

"Assassin...? What could an assassin want here in the sacred land of Karin ?!" Bora murmured but Taopaipai heard him and replied while pointing to Goku "i want nothing from this land, but rather from that boy over there !"

"What do you want from me ? I don't even know you, old man." Goku was confused.

"If i tell you i was contracted by the red ribbon army, you should understand correct ? My job is to kill the kids who's been getting in the way of their hunt for the balls." He explained with a sly smile.

"Red ribbon !! Again ?! They're so persistent !!" Goku became angry and prepared for battle.

"When i think about it were is your acomplice ? Well it doesn't matter you'll die anyway !" Taopaipai said.

"F-father help out that boy !" Upa asked Bora with nervousness in his voice.

"That boy and his brother saved my son's life. If you do not leave at once i will have to make you do so." Bora looked seriously at Taopaipai.

Then Bora took a spear and took a fighting stance but Taopaipai moved really fast and Goku and Bora didn't see him taking the spear form Bora's hands.

Taopaipai was holding the spear with only two fingers but even with his big muscle Bora couldn't even move the spear.

Then Taopaipai lifted the spear and Bora with it and shaked the spear as if you shake a kids toy and send Bora in the air before throwing the spear into Bora's heart.

Goku tried to save him by calling Kinto-un but he was too late as the spear already pierced Bora's body who was falling to the ground, dead.

This angered Goku who charged at Taopaipai to fight him but Taopaipai dodged his every move before kicking him on the face and send him flying on the Karin tower.

But when Goku got up it shocked Taopaipai but without taking a break Goku launched a Kamehameha on him.

Taopaipai crossed his arms and when the Kamehameha dissipated Taopaipai was fine with only his clothes being shatered.

That made Taopaipai angry and he launched a Dodon ray that hit Goku on the heart then took the bags with the Dragon ball in it and took the pillar he came with and sent it to the sky flying on it.

[Kuruma POV]

"Why didn't you save them ??? Isn't Goku your brother ???" Karin shouted to me.

"Don't worry he is not dead ! And we can resurrect Bora with the Dragon balls !" I replied while seeing Goku trying to climb the Karin tower.

[That's the end of this chapter ! As i said before i lost my phone and had to get a new one so i couldn't upload chapters in the meantime so i will post another chapter tomorrow.

Good day/night to you all !]