I finished reading up to chapter 28 -2 ads
Let me tell you, you should follow Garet's advice, don't stress yourself out and go slowly with your writing, most of the time a writer rushes to put everything he can in a few words, Which ends up destroying a story and you getting bored of it.
Tip to improve your writing
* keep a separate sheet of ideas for your stories, something like a mini cap of what happens to your MC(often a story is the journey not the final stop, you will only make a litrpg if you don't tell us what happens between what your OC does)
* Try to plan what path your story or mc will take.
*example: reincarnation, finding new family, depression about the past,Finding a reason to continue, planning an adventure, traveling to find your past, finding a new friend, Find a rival,A big defeat,Finding a teacher, getting help, overcome adversity, save the princess, Finish your adventure, return home.(There is a book about this called *The Hero's Journey*)
You made the mistake of making your OC super OP, that's why he doesn't need more personal growth, he acts the opposite of how he should (the honorable one? He stole the healing spell without telling her)
You compressed your initial 2 year story of Interactions into like 5 chapters, and then a month or so describing few interactions, super fast paced
Try to read the chapters after writing them.
Lots of love❤️, kisses😘, 🕺 Dances, I hope you do well at school and that you get better at writing, Try to guide that wild beast of your imagination and live well.
