The_man_The_myth

I think it’s realistic sirzechs don’t even reach the mcs power till he was like 50

If I remember he was after eris

Holy sh!t mate

Yeah the original world in overlord is messed up

Yes but it’s 1/3 the size and gives almost as much points.

Kinda sad but great in a way how ff writers like you can take a story that was such a disappointment like Mha and make something more of it. I like the whole idea you have honestly and you got down the arrogance that all jjk sorcerers have with his goal to become a god. I would just say that don’t let people get you down on here I’ve read thousands of stories on here and all of them were probably the best 3000 on here. And I can say with experience that this story is very good

I would recommend you ignore the reviews below. The gramar mistakes are a few misspelled words and does not affect the story as well and the author uses a cool plot device that explaines devil maturity and grouth of strength and doesn’t really slow down the story at all. This is a really high quality ff if I’m being honest. It’s original and the mc is a really cool guy. I’m sure this story will be popular with time but I really like that this really isn’t a harem but actual plot and dialogue.

Should have killed the guy that threatened to send him to be a sex slave

Thanks

Bro this is really good