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BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

Thaids, strange monsters that have evolved from animals, have laid siege to humanity, occupying vast swaths of the planet's surface. In a world plagued by the presence of menacing monsters, society has undergone a profound transformation, built upon the foundation of individual combat prowess. Amidst this unforgiving backdrop lives Erik, an abandoned young boy who navigates the harsh realities of a society that values strength above all else. Despite possessing a power deemed utterly useless, Erik perseveres, unsuccessfully trying to find his place in this tumultuous world. But fate has a way of turning the tides. Suddenly Erik's father returns home, bringing with him something that Erik could never have foreseen. Will this unexpected turn of events be enough to change Erik's fate and the fate of humanity in this dangerous new world? [DOWNLOADING INFORMATION FROM THE HOST -GENERAL KNOWLEDGE- IN PROGRESS] [0%...1%....5%...30%...70%...100%] [DOWNLOAD COMPLETE] [ALL SYSTEMS READY] [WELCOME TO THE BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM, HOST ERIK ROMANO] -------------------------------------------------------- Greetings, dear readers! As the author of this book, I would like to take a moment to talk about its structure and pacing. When I first started writing this story, I was still learning the craft of writing and exploring the world and characters I had created. As a result, the first volume of this book may feel a little slow-paced at times, as I took my time to introduce the setting, the plot, and the main characters. However, as I gained more experience and feedback from readers like you, I realized that I could improve the pacing and make the story more engaging and exciting. Therefore, I have been constantly revising and editing the chapters, trying to find ways to streamline the exposition, increase the tension, and deepen the character development. You may notice some differences between the original and current versions if you have read the first volume already. Some scenes may have been cut or shortened, while others may have been expanded or rearranged. However, I want to assure you that the core of the story remains the same and that the characters and themes will continue to evolve and surprise you. The last issue I would like to address is the portrayal of the main character (MC) on this website. I have noticed that on average, on this website, there are two types of MCs: 1) The ruthless, apathetic, or cold MC 2) The normal or intelligent MC The problem with both types is that they often become godlike or fighting experts within just five chapters. Not only is this unrealistic, but it can also become monotonous, in my opinion. It seems that many authors tend to use these two types frequently. That is why I have created a completely different main character for my story. In this story, the MC is flawed and has faced many challenges in life. Unlike other characters who are already ahead, the MC finds himself starting from nothing. He learns to fight, interact with people, and manage difficult situations. This means that he won't always make the same choices or take the same path as you would. It's important to remember that every person would react differently in each situation, and there is no universal answer for how to handle every circumstance. Please keep this in mind when you come across moments where you may not agree with the MC's actions and consider his unique perspective and way of thinking. If you want to share some thoughts or have a chat with me, you can join the discord's server here: https://discord.gg/dZpb4TBRJc

PilgrimJagger · Fantasi
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BEFORE YOU START THE NOVEL READ THIS.

Ok, before you start reading this novel, here are a couple of things you must know:

1) I'm a non-native English speaker; this means that the way I talk will differ from that of an American or an English person. So, if you notice anything unusual, please let me know. After all, I want to learn just like everyone else. Besides, I'm relatively new at writing and still need to understand Web novel's audience. You may like some things and dislike others, but be aware that I'm doing my best.

2) I constantly recheck previous chapters, but I do not merely check for grammar; I constantly rewrite the book to improve things. As I write and learn more about how to do it or listen to the readers' preferences, it is logical to change things here. Just as an example, the first 351 differ completely from a month ago. What I want to say is that to enjoy the book, read on Web novel only. For example, chapters around 15-20 have a lot of different things that weren't present in the previous versions. Things are more consistent and more believable (in my opinion), and I added dialogue, monsters, and last, they are better written. I did all of this by listening to what the readers said.

3) Your comments and reviews don't go unnoticed. If I see that there is a lot of criticism regarding something, I may change it.

4) I try to stay as far away as possible from clichés, but some of them are still necessary. I know you're sick of hearing the same old clichés, but I swear you won't find many of them here. I don't think you should accuse me of using cliches, and stop reading after chapter 30 because you are too impatient to see what happens next.

5) The story gets better after chapter 50 because I had more time to introduce the characters and improve the pace and tone and things further improve as time goes on. 

6) The MC I portrayed is not simple; I tried to stick to a more realistic character instead of portraying a nearly almighty, ever-present, all-knowing MC, as most stories do.

7) THIS IS VERY IMPORTANT. If you want to leave a review, comment, etc., you must stay CIVIL. Have you insulted me or any of the other readers? I will delete the message. You only gave it one star and wrote "trash"? Deleted. So, what should you do? I'm not saying I only want good comments and reviews; it would be fantastic, but I guess everyone can't like you and what you do. But if you want the message to stick, you must explain why you didn't like something. Do you think the MC is stupid? Explain why. Do you think things should have been different? Explain why. Most of the time, people make negative comments only to piss off us authors; I've seen it in many books, and this kind of behavior won't be tolerated here because I'm a human being and won't be mistreated by random guys on the internet.

Hope everything is clear.