Item: A Blue Lock Fanfic
Rating: 2.2

Aurelius04Lv131mth

2024-09-15 00:54

Same boring plot that happens in every BL fanfic. Oh I’m gonna be in same wing as Isagi and make everyone stronger in the beginning so when the next selection comes everyone is stronger and prove my worth yadayada. Boring and overused. Come up with something original you bum.

A Blue Lock Fanfic

Siamus_404

Not enough ratings

52 Chs

Liked by 9 people

Replies4

Aayush_stormsLv4

wait this fic is BL or are you using that a an insult? (genuine question)

1mth

Aurelius04Lv13

No just shortened for Blue Lock

Aayush_storms:wait this fic is BL or are you using that a an insult? (genuine question)

1mth

Aayush_stormsLv4

thanks you scared me for a second there.

Aurelius04:No just shortened for Blue Lock

1mth

ACHILLESLv4

diffrence is the mc feels like an knock isagi and all friendly and sh in here🤣

Aurelius04:No just shortened for Blue Lock

1mth

Other Reviews

ACHILLESLv4

Okay this is an actual review,, Kira/Mc is an knock off isagi with better dribbling and shooting.( Author doesn't describe his moves he'll say. "Kira shot was perfect and went corner" or dribbled smoothly, Theres no telling or unique to him. He helps everyone in blue lock/In His wing like isagi and raichi. Author its blue lock give him his own personality he always trying to improve them. *(And through out the whole story he had not improved or got better Nothing for the whole story*) AND Then on the field he trys writting him all hard and try to make him feel less friendly making orders but then off he always helping and has no backbone to say no... Im done reading this and hope this will tell what you wanted to know about the fic. Story development slow as he build raichi his own background and to make him improve better *His favorite character which is fine but don't be changing the story or fic because of that*. (To learn more on blue lock writting would say read God of Blue lock and other fics just to learn how they write it and take notes as your mc has nothing fancy or cool to even keep him in blue lock.)

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NightWalker_75Lv1

So far so good, the only tip for the author is to try to finish the chapters in a more natural way, as there were several released at once it didn't interfere with reading, but when the normal frequency starts it may leave something to be desired. Great work!

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