Item: A Blue Lock Fanfic
Rating: 4
Author: Morningstar_D_Cain

Morningstar_D_CainLv43mth

2024-09-16 14:13

The only thing i don't like bout it is that MC likes? to play more of a midfielder and he doesn't score goals when he clearly could do so, often passing the ball to his teammate but other than that the book has a lot of potential. pls make him score more goals author

A Blue Lock Fanfic

Siamus_404

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52 Chs

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Siamus_404Author

he will, soon.

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ACHILLESLv4

kayy

Siamus_404:he will, soon.

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Same boring plot that happens in every BL fanfic. Oh I’m gonna be in same wing as Isagi and make everyone stronger in the beginning so when the next selection comes everyone is stronger and prove my worth yadayada. Boring and overused. Come up with something original you bum.

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