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Grenhaer
GrenhaerLv43mth
2024-08-08 23:08

This work is garbage with very, very poorly written characters (it feels like Satoru has schizophrenia... or he's a tsundere...). The idea of ​​the work is interesting, but the implementation is terrible (I couldn’t even read two chapters)

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itachi1010
itachi1010Author

Mc doesn’t have schizophrenia and isn’t a tsunade. I don’t know where you got the idea

Grenhaer
GrenhaerLv4

his thoughts, actions and words contradict each other... (some kind of “porridge”)

itachi1010:Mc doesn’t have schizophrenia and isn’t a tsunade. I don’t know where you got the idea
Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv13

Idk if you meant to do this but gojo is gojo satorus last name. His name given name IS Satoru, so it should be Satoru Uchiha if you wanted to be accurate.

itachi1010:Mc doesn’t have schizophrenia and isn’t a tsunade. I don’t know where you got the idea
itachi1010
itachi1010Author

Yeah, I meant to do that. I have never heard anyone call him by his first name. So Gojo might as well be his first name

Raptor2244:Idk if you meant to do this but gojo is gojo satorus last name. His name given name IS Satoru, so it should be Satoru Uchiha if you wanted to be accurate.
Kingleviathan0316
Kingleviathan0316Lv4

This fanfic is written very good So stop talking nonsense Why don’t you try to write ur own fic and stop talking trash

Kingleviathan0316
Kingleviathan0316Lv4

Bas**rd

Grenhaer
GrenhaerLv4

...and then the first shit eater appeared

Kingleviathan0316:Bas**rd
Doctor_Blue
Doctor_BlueLv15

why does it feel like author's alt account 😂😂😂😂😂

Kingleviathan0316:Bas**rd
Doctor_Blue
Doctor_BlueLv15

it feels like author's alt account ... anyway thanks for the review 😊

Grenhaer:...and then the first shit eater appeared
bladerunner_2049
bladerunner_2049Lv4

the fk is wrong with u when a reader tells his opinion about this fanfic and help the readers get an idea about how this fanfic is and is it worth reading or not ( I have a suspicion that this is Author's account)

Kingleviathan0316:This fanfic is written very good So stop talking nonsense Why don’t you try to write ur own fic and stop talking trash
ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

Fic is awfull read something actually well written

Kingleviathan0316:This fanfic is written very good So stop talking nonsense Why don’t you try to write ur own fic and stop talking trash
Xiaoyunyun
XiaoyunyunLv2

This is a work of a devil beware my fellow readers.

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Ole_Tessmann
Ole_TessmannLv4

The story is good. That’s all it is tho. It has its negatives and positives like anything else but the quality of this doesn’t make you have that itch where you want to read more and more. His wishes are explained in ch. 10 for those people that might be confused why he isn’t totally Op. still though the author has his own theories of things and integrates them into the story which may rub some people the wrong way.. for example kust the way his infinity works or how he’s basically not letting ‘gojo‘ acutally utilize his godly chakra control. Some other things don’t make sense either like him and itachi learning seals from kushina to them in a matter of a few paragraphs being able to use flying thunder god. There should be a normal progression of skills, you can’t jump from explaining how kushina can make huge storage seals to them both just having flying thunder god. There are so many sealing jutsu that could be incorporated into their fighting style and since they’ve learnt it they should also use them no? This story would be pretty good for someone who has never watched naruto because even the most basic things are overexplained so the story often times feels lifeless, adding to that is that it seems the author is not a native English speaker so some things sometimes just come out wrong I feel like. Positive things are that the author has a plan in mind for the story and acutally gives explanations to things others would just overlook. I also like that itachi is being brought up as a rival for mc even though it does feel like the author has a hard on for itachi making him even more talented than he originally was… all in all pretty good but not comparable to some of the top tier stories on webnovel

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