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owener
owenerLv41yr
2023-08-26 17:48

Chapter 20 was a huge disappointment. His own hatsu cripples him.I would have been fine with the nerf to his random ability. I would have even liked it, but taking away abilities he already has is stupid. Add on top bodily mutilation and his own ability screwing him over for breaking never established rules.Could have made it so he has beginner's boost for the first few months, and then you go to new monthly pulls.Might change my rating depending on the authors response or drop altogether.

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EclipseWanderer
EclipseWandererLv1

He get buffed in the followed up chapter

khanderblander
khanderblanderLv3

no, no lo hace, empeora

EclipseWanderer:He get buffed in the followed up chapter
RuberX
RuberXLv4

so you rate something zero for one ch that was not to your liking if it was 3 Star then i would have not say anything but still for one ch you gave the man who wrote 19 page very good and lengthy ch a 1 star Even Through webnovel ask you and then calculate how much start it should get do you know why it because of people like you just go give anybody 1 star for such stupid reason just give him at least 3 Star bro.

theanimemail
theanimemailLv10

... dumb reason for a 1 star.

NowGoWithTheFlow
NowGoWithTheFlowLv14

Right reason for one star. It will show people that author may make bad decisions more often so people don't wast time reading this. Wish I read this before reading because it was a waste of time, anwas worse than mention above.

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