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Review Detail of DjxCarma in The Cultivating Seductress System

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DjxCarma
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To be honest, the story is alright, but it is hard to notice the dialogue in some chapters. The narrative has a good flow, and each character has their moments to shine. How the story goes off from the start seems like a quest guide on what’s the current aim for the mc to achieve. Aside from that, some sections amongst the chapters could have used a lot of work, but it is still a good story to read.

The Cultivating Seductress System

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Thank you for the criticism! I think this can help me a lot in improving my story.