Writing Quality 2/5 Stars So many grammar and spelling errors! But, it's still somewhat readable. Stability of Updates 5/5 Stars At least one chapter per day Story Development 2/5 Stars This fanfic doesn't read like a story. It reads like a summary of events, with just the bare minimum (misspelled) dialogue. Sometimes the author doesn't even summarize events, and just throws random people/things into the story without any explanation. Character Design 1/5 Stars The MC is very one dimensional. We don't really know how he reacts in certain situations because, like I said before, we the readers only get a summary of events, as opposed to the events being narrated as they happen. What little depth we do get on the MC's character makes little sense. The MC is just supposed to be regular Jon Snow. Not a reincarnated or transmigrated individual in Snow's body. Just Jon Snow. Yet he acts like, and has the morals of, a person from modern earth. World Background 3/5 Stars Many fanfic authors just use GRRM's series as is, and don't try to make any personal mark on the world of A Song of Ice and Fire. This author tries to make his/her own mark. It didn't turn out well, but it's the effort that counts ** Please also note that (at the time of posting this review) half of the 5 star reviews submitted here are repeats by the same three users (bots?). So, please take the high rating of this story with a grain of salt.
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