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SYIHAAKIRALv143yr
2020-12-28 00:13

Hello there, Lucifer101. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

The Game of Ice and Fire

Lucifer101
4.7
74 Chs

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OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15

Writing Quality 2/5 Stars So many grammar and spelling errors! But, it's still somewhat readable. Stability of Updates 5/5 Stars At least one chapter per day Story Development 2/5 Stars This fanfic doesn't read like a story. It reads like a summary of events, with just the bare minimum (misspelled) dialogue. Sometimes the author doesn't even summarize events, and just throws random people/things into the story without any explanation. Character Design 1/5 Stars The MC is very one dimensional. We don't really know how he reacts in certain situations because, like I said before, we the readers only get a summary of events, as opposed to the events being narrated as they happen. What little depth we do get on the MC's character makes little sense. The MC is just supposed to be regular Jon Snow. Not a reincarnated or transmigrated individual in Snow's body. Just Jon Snow. Yet he acts like, and has the morals of, a person from modern earth. World Background 3/5 Stars Many fanfic authors just use GRRM's series as is, and don't try to make any personal mark on the world of A Song of Ice and Fire. This author tries to make his/her own mark. It didn't turn out well, but it's the effort that counts ** Please also note that (at the time of posting this review) half of the 5 star reviews submitted here are repeats by the same three users (bots?). So, please take the high rating of this story with a grain of salt.

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Lucifer101
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Mandatory author 5 star review please check my patreon if you like my work and want to support me thanks https://***.patreon.com/emperordragon

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Lucas_Santos
Lucas_SantosLv1

Muito bom eu sou um leitor antigo de Got e tenho que dizer que essa fanfic tem muito futuro e pra ser uma das melhores e chegar a top 10 só é vc continuar assim sucesso vou tá acompanhando agora.

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12V1Lv2

Reveal spoiler

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LuminouShadow
LuminouShadowLv4

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joedarkwolf10000
joedarkwolf10000Lv2

very good work with a good flow in the story . exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp

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sheiksik
sheiksikLv2

Reveal spoiler

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Ikaris_Prime
Ikaris_PrimeLv13

So I didn't read it because as soon as I read jon snow I lost interest but if he was a person rencarnated into jon snow I would have been interested.

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