there will be a bit of romance, won't last for long, unless people enjoy it

It's promising imo. Basically a new victim every chapter, but I feel like the kills are way too quick, since this is a horror novel, maybe add further detail on how he tortures / kills the victims :pray: Also it's moving forward a bit too quick, I think author could add more detail about the characters, things that happen to Ethan, his new school life, etc. Overall, I do like the idea of it and can't wait to see others get killed.

they wouldn't run, realistically, they've tormented him for a long time no? so they would know if he's weak or not, one good move against one of them shouldn't scare them. If anything, they would all jump him

*eyes turn red when angry* :sob: [img=recommend] hint of something supernatural? will he gets str boost if he lets his other side take over

not believable, there would be a ton of evidence + it's a kid, 100% couldn't have made it look like they did it themselves officers must be eepy or something

<3, I will release 5 every Thursday. But I might release 5 more during the weekend just for that [img=proud]

Thank you :pray:

If you guys have any ideas or recommendations for the plot, then feel free to leave a comment. <3