Review Detail of vielr in Killers Instinct

It's promising imo. Basically a new victim every chapter, but I feel like the kills are way too quick, since this is a horror novel, maybe add further detail on how he tortures / kills the victims :pray: Also it's moving forward a bit too quick, I think author could add more detail about the characters, things that happen to Ethan, his new school life, etc. Overall, I do like the idea of it and can't wait to see others get killed.