thanks for the constructive criticism I appreciate it a lot actually since I do feel that my lack of detail has made this novel lack a lot of things that are essential key to a novel like the one I'm trying to make, I do appreciate this a lot, I will always accept more constructive criticism if you got anymore for this novel, since I'm working on this solo, with no external help and it's been a few years since I last really decided to try and write anything major like this.