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ImmortalDoctor

ImmortalDoctor

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Life is nothing but a collection of stories.

2023-02-26 JointGlobal
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor1h
    Répondu à SkillsMasterAkurai

    What do you mean?

    Ch 40 Episode 9 – Protagonist (4)
    Lord of the Stories
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor10h
    Répondu à CheekClapper2K

    Is it? or was I mistaken?

    (T/L: 100,000 US dollars = 15,305,900 yen)
    Lord of the Stories
    Urbain · ImmortalDoctor
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor2d
    Répondu à SkillsMasterAkurai

    What do you mean?

    Ch 39 Episode 9 – Protagonist (3)
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    Urbain · ImmortalDoctor
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor2d
    Commenté

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 13 :Dark Purple Blood Dungeon
    SS-Rank Skill: Instant Rebirth
    Fantaisie · BlakLord
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor3d
    Posté

    I like the story so far but the chapters are too short to give a five star review. I'll come back when the author uploads more chapters.

    RISE OF THE FALLEN
    Fantaisie · Spandex_Playz
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor5d
    Répondu à Imaginary_Guy

    Yeah

    –BlackMountainKing
    DxD: The Illusion Killer
    Anime et bandes dessinées · ImmortalDoctor
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor5d
    Commenté

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 6 Corridor
    Alchemist Knight: Under a Shadow of Moonlight
    Fantaisie · OrbitAround
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor5d
    Commenté

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 6 Corridor
    Alchemist Knight: Under a Shadow of Moonlight
    Fantaisie · OrbitAround
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor6d
    Posté

    Time to write a review. But I do, i just want to say I'm brutally honest when writing reviews. in any case, let's begin. I must say, this story is unique in its own way. It has an amazing concept but it was difficult for me to read. I suggest the author reread his work and edit some things to make the story easier to read and understand. Apart from that, I think this will make an interesting story.

    ELEMENTO: THE SUPREME GOD OF THE MOTHER NATURE
    Fantaisie · RISHABH_Sharma
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor6d
    Commenté

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 13 :Dark Purple Blood Dungeon
    SS-Rank Skill: Instant Rebirth
    Fantaisie · BlakLord
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor7d
    Répondu à SkillsMasterAkurai

    Thank you. If you notice any more errors, please tell me.

    Ce paragraphe a été supprimé.
    Lord of the Stories
    Urbain · ImmortalDoctor
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor9d
    Répondu à SkillsMasterAkurai

    His name is Jakga. Suwon is an error

    Ch 17 Episode 4 – Hunting (2)
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor9d
    Commenté

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 6 Corridor
    Alchemist Knight: Under a Shadow of Moonlight
    Fantaisie · OrbitAround
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor13d
    Répondu à BlakLord

    Thank you for your honest review, dear reader.

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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor14d
    Posté

    It's that time of the day. Time to leave an honest review. I must say, this story is pretty decent. The plot is interesting and new. Although there are a few grammatical errors, they can be ignored. Overall, it's a good story. If the Author improves his writing then this book will reach its full potential. Can't wait to see how the story progresses.

    The Hero's POV
    Fantaisie · WhiteAuthor
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor15d
    Posté

    I must say this story is so good that I have to write a review. Overall, the writing quality is good, the plot and romance was done nicely. Although the isekai plot of dying by trunk-kun is overused, who doesn't like trunk-kun? I feel like it deserves to have its character seeing how it is used all the time. Anyways, I have one complaint though. it's the spacing! Please, space your work! I can't stress how important this is! No reader likes reading a very long paragraph. It just kills the mood. That's the only thing keeping me back from giving a complete five star review. Continue writing this story, Author. May the story bless you.

    I Wish For the Top of the Tower
    Fantaisie · AthensAwaitsMe
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor15d
    Commenté
    Ch 1 The Interview
    I Wish For the Top of the Tower
    Fantaisie · AthensAwaitsMe
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor16d
    Commenté

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 13 :Dark Purple Blood Dungeon
    SS-Rank Skill: Instant Rebirth
    Fantaisie · BlakLord
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor16d
    Posté

    I'm going to leave an honest review now. I must say, this is a rather interesting story. Although I have a few complaints such as grammatical errors here and there. Then there is also the problem about the spacing. Please don't join your words together. It makes it hard for the readers to read. Make use of paragraphs when a character wants to say something. Apart from that, I think the story is okay. Continue writing this story, Author. And may the story bless you.

    Eclipse Arcana
    Fantaisie · MS_Studio_3460
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  • ImmortalDoctor
    ImmortalDoctor16d
    Répondu à MS_Studio_3460

    Thank you for your input, dear reader.

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