ImmortalDoctor
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Is it? or was I mistaken?
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Time to write a review. But I do, i just want to say I'm brutally honest when writing reviews. in any case, let's begin. I must say, this story is unique in its own way. It has an amazing concept but it was difficult for me to read. I suggest the author reread his work and edit some things to make the story easier to read and understand. Apart from that, I think this will make an interesting story.
Thank you. If you notice any more errors, please tell me.
It's that time of the day. Time to leave an honest review. I must say, this story is pretty decent. The plot is interesting and new. Although there are a few grammatical errors, they can be ignored. Overall, it's a good story. If the Author improves his writing then this book will reach its full potential. Can't wait to see how the story progresses.
I must say this story is so good that I have to write a review. Overall, the writing quality is good, the plot and romance was done nicely. Although the isekai plot of dying by trunk-kun is overused, who doesn't like trunk-kun? I feel like it deserves to have its character seeing how it is used all the time. Anyways, I have one complaint though. it's the spacing! Please, space your work! I can't stress how important this is! No reader likes reading a very long paragraph. It just kills the mood. That's the only thing keeping me back from giving a complete five star review. Continue writing this story, Author. May the story bless you.
I'm going to leave an honest review now. I must say, this is a rather interesting story. Although I have a few complaints such as grammatical errors here and there. Then there is also the problem about the spacing. Please don't join your words together. It makes it hard for the readers to read. Make use of paragraphs when a character wants to say something. Apart from that, I think the story is okay. Continue writing this story, Author. And may the story bless you.