ELEMENTO: THE SUPREME GOD OF THE MOTHER NATURE

I like the concept of the story, especially with the author's use of mythology, but the text was a bit hard to read, since it was sometimes a bit inconsistent. The flow of the story was okay, but at times it felt like there was a strange lump of information.

The story is interesting with a fresh breath using Indian mythology and modern India is definitely something i haven't seen Well Yoga and Dosh things are pretty accurate But the author needs to improve and fix Grammar mistakes, repeated sentences and i would like to suggest using " " This as opening and closing dialogue it is there but not consistent It makes hard to read

Time to write a review. But I do, i just want to say I'm brutally honest when writing reviews. in any case, let's begin. I must say, this story is unique in its own way. It has an amazing concept but it was difficult for me to read. I suggest the author reread his work and edit some things to make the story easier to read and understand. Apart from that, I think this will make an interesting story.

Promising book with very interesting spiritual and metaphysical concepts. However, the language needs reworking to make reading it smoother and easier. Should be great after editing!