Tsk!

Good job, princess.

get him or else, I will, lol!

The start is very intriguing, nice author!

cruel!

love how it's narrated.

A Hero in action! Interesting...

I agree!

This novel is well written, though I don't typically read genres like this yet, I binge read, and this novel has potential, keep up the good work author! Added this to my library!

Good writing. the author has a great potential and the novel as well, I like reading a adventure fantasy and this is giving. you brought different elements into this story which I like it, I hope you keep up the good work!

The story is written well, though it only has 2 chapters, I can say that this story has potential. I hope the author continue writing! keep up the good work

To me, the book is intriguing; I'm only getting started, but I'm enjoying the plot so far I'm enjoying the plot. All I have to say is thumbs up to the author and that I will continue to read it since I truly like it, the content is gripping, and the book cover is lovely. . The characters are also incredibly captivating; this book is unquestionably a treasure. Excellent work

This book has the potential to improve even as I am just beginning to read it. There are no grammatical errors, but I think the characters are excellent and their FL is adorable. The writing is of high quality.

This novel has a potential. Though it's too early to make a review because only consists 2 chapters but I'm craving more, Intriguing. I love a father-daughter relationship. Keep up the good work!

Intriguing...I love father-daughter relationship. Keep up the good work!

The environment is just intriguing enough for me to like the ideas in it quite a bit, and the tale around it also looks fairly engaging. This genuinely had me enthralled from the start. keep up the good work

A good story. I appreciate how the environment and characters are evolving. I wholeheartedly suggest reading this book. You cannot possibly become bored.

 It's off to a great start. I must mention that the author is already competent and has an excellent writing quality. The story's quality was outstanding! I am impressed by the author's creativity, which was well transferred to my senses. You did an excellent job!

This novel has a good start. It's very interesting and the first chapter got me hooked up and the latest chapter left a cliffhanger. I need more of this!too bad It only consist 3 chapters.