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Reo_2yrCommentéI love the way you portray his emotions/actions and thoughts. 😄
The woman slowly descended the stairs with a smile on her face. She was wearing a dark blue blouse with a long tight skirt, the sound of the high heels that she wore was getting closer and closer to the man who was standing silently in front of the librarian's desk. Despite the man seeing a beautiful woman in front of him, there was no sign of surprise or astonishment, the man's face still flat like it had lost its muscles.- Reo_2yrCommenté
Interesting!
The man looked up, looking for the ceiling of the building that was increasingly unseeable as far as his eyes could see. The man thought that now he was in a tower, from where he stood, he could see other bookshelves on the upper floors. The more he looked up, the more amazed he felt. - Reo_2yrRépondu à hatentea
The pronunciation is on the harder side. I wanted to make it so that you can hear the hard ''R''. Well, it's best to read it out loud and make it sound the way that's more fitting for you. And thank you for your comment!
''Sho or wae deno ate er o meral rasa. Or es utacu ina uts herid ot ercas iowo oe kile te urcreta tah es jin te eshu, tate uai oro pri tosh es o fake osa if ere es o meral rasa insa it wou te hut (Listen I didn't know you were a mortal race. I was cautious and just tried to scare away or kill the creature that was in the bushes, that's why my first shot was a fake so if there was a mortal race inside it wouldn't get hit.)'' - Reo_2yrRépondu à Prince_nonchalant
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Starting it! I will write a review when I finish all 6 chapter.😄
Ce chapitre a été supprimé. - Reo_2yrRépondu à Arc_ValkyriaCh 2 The Green Haired Girl
- Reo_2yrRépondu à CREATIVE_SPACECh 1 The blessing of Makore family
- Reo_2yrRépondu à Arc_ValkyriaCh 1 The blessing of Makore family
- Reo_2yrRépondu à Arc_Valkyria
What's related to it? I'm curious😅
''Aalish!'' - Reo_2yrRépondu à Arc_Valkyria
- Reo_2yrPosté
The novel is great. I had a bit of a hard time reading at the start the writing was confusing at first but it changed over time to a better and more polished one. World building is good I had no problems with it. I'm interested with the plot and story! I would like to see where this novel is headed. In the end, good job author! The relationships between the characters are interesting! I also had no problem with character design.