Review Detail of hatentea in Ecto-Yaksh

First, the concept of the story is very interesting, world building is unique, even the author makes a unique language in his own world. Good idea. It's just that the first few chapters are a bit confusing, it gets better in later chapters, but there's still a bit of a headache. Like a paragraph that is too long. This is a good and unique story, keep up the good work!