I like the story. though you just made one mistake. the 'he' became 'she'. I like your main character. How he perceives love. maybe he experienced something that made him lose the meaning of love. well in your first chap he's living alone. maybe it was connected to his parents. Though it's kinda negative to have the characteristics of having no consideration of others and just sugar-coating them. it's still a good read. I'll be waiting for his development throughout the story.

brings back memory. lol hahaha. I remember before the pandemic. I'm always late like my first subject is ending and when I got to school I'm just going to sleep.😆

I like the characteristics of your main character since I'm just like him. I mean I'm kinda talkative but I don't really wanna go out and don't wanna be forced to smile and talk to others since I find it really awkward. Your character has this personality that I really like. Your first chap is light which gives the readers a nice first impression. It's not that heavy but gives of a cool and great atmosphere. Makes me want to continue and also your story is easy to understand. I mean you use words that easy to digest. It's nice though 'cause there are others books out there who has really giving of the vibes of ancient story since they have deep vocabularies which is mostly only popular among adults and professionals. Your story is great that even a 12 years old below will like it. And about your grammars, it's fine. I also don't know if it's right or what. Since I understand it, it's right. since English is not my first language. Besides imperfections make things perfect the way it is. I also like your writing style. Great author. Thumbs up for you.

I like the story. Even in the first chap the demon is cool I like his wholesomeness like he just said 'that's an interesting human you got there, alright I will grant you your wish' it was as if they're just wishing for a piece of candy. And yeah the father's a trash too. When I hated a character that's when I know what an amazing author you are that made me hate a character. Totally like it.

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The way you write is so amazing like you have a sense of humour and I like the way she thinks and how you blend funny things that are serious with the mc. I like your book since I'm kinda fun of greek mythology. Thumbs up for you author I salute you.

It's cool and amazing. I was hooked up in just the first chapter. It's not actually my first time to read this kind of genre but yours is different. It's actually interesting that you'll want to read and read until you quench your thirst about the story.

The story is common for me because I've read a lot of werewolf stories before but it's interesting because of the main character. Even though it's a fantasy story since werewolves and vampires are involved you can learn something from this novel. I haven't read all of the chapters but I'm sure it'll click with the other readers. I know all of us has different kind of taste but since I really got tired of reading werewolf stories maybe some other time. I'll try reading the rest.

I like the story because it's like I'm just watching a korean drama. It's really realistic and idealistic even the characters are remarkable they exhibit a great personality especially the main character, Yuri. I can't wait to see what will happen to her and the rest of the story.

Hello. Welcome to my novel hehehe

I love the creativeness and structure of some qoutes that the main characters have written. Writing quality is very good and I know it gets better and better as the story goes on. Just the story development is a little bit unstable but I think it's because of the distressing life of the main character which is very effective and I was touched by his mental challenge. I like the character design it's realistic and relative especially now a lot of young people go through this kind of distress. All in all the story is first-rate and probably going to leave a remarkable scar on the heart of a reader which will thank you for creating a masterpiece.