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The Desire Demon

Auteur: FlameCookies
Fantasy
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Lisez le roman The Desire Demon écrit par l'auteur FlameCookies publié sur WebNovel. Once upon a time, a boy was born from the frowned upon relationship between a king is and a commoner. Furthermore, the child did not have access to the system nearly everyone else possessed. His statu...

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Once upon a time, a boy was born from the frowned upon relationship between a king is and a commoner. Furthermore, the child did not have access to the system nearly everyone else possessed. His status at an all-time low, his father tries to get rid of him for power but this is when his own powers decided to awaken. Who will survive the consequences of the ensuing war? ---- Art by MichelleLeeee [HCBL II ILMA]#5111 a good friend of mine please check her out!

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A Boy was Seen Walking within the Forest when he came upon a House with Sliver Gate so he open the Gate and went inside then he start to walk toward the Door and open it "Hello is anyone home" His Small Childlike voice sound out. When he hear Nothing he proceeded to Walk inside. He saw a Notes and Read it. (5 Min Later) Luffy start to Cry to himself "Stupid Marine and jiji" Luffy said to himself. Luffy saw a 2 Sword and his Notes. "Luffy these Sword Are Ying/Yang the Twin Sword they used to be mine but now it yours since i am Gone" From Mom to You Lu. Luffy cry to himself Again he Wipe the Tear Away and Start to Touch Both Sword and Start to Hold them He Touch The Handle with Both hand and Take his Other Hand and Touch the Other now ye got Both Sword in Hand. 5 Min Later Luffy Start to Move his Body and Put both Sword Down and Walk The Gate he Close it then walk toward inside And Colse the Door and then Walk Toward a Box on the Table With the Notes Said. "Luffy Inside the Box is a Furit called a Devil Furit they take your Ability to Swim and gave you the Power The Fruit Has that you have Eaten...The Devil Furit Name is Called Sakura Petal" Luffy look at the Furit in Awe and start to read again "The Sakura Furit is so Dangerous Combine With the Ying/Yang Sword and Haki can be Unstoppable". "What is Ha..ki" Luffy Said then look Down Again. "Luffy if you want to Know Haki...Haki is Everyone that can be unlock through Training there 2 Haki people Learn and there 1 Haki that people are Born 1 in a Millon has and it say people who unlock it can he King" Luffy Mine start to process it then It came to his Sense He read Again. "1 Haki is Called Kenbunshoku Haki Which can allow you to see Where your Foes going to hit you so you can dodge it The 2nd Haki is Called Armament which can harden your Skin act like a Layer that can cause Damage to your Foes if use Right...The Last one you had Which you are Born with is called Haoshoku Haki Also called King Haki is you can figure how to use yours Ok Luffy" Luffy start to process the information Again. "Luffy The is the last One in the Box ok" Luffy start to nooded his Head and Open The Chest next to the Letter and read it again "Ok Luffy i going no matter what happen i am Watching you no matter what happen ok" Luffy Nooded his Head and a Smile started to Form. " Luffy No Matter What do not Join the Marine the Absolute Justice is not Justice at All They Will kill you no matter what Unborn,Children and Family ok....By Luffy Taken Care" Luffy Start to pick up the Furit and Ate it then almost puke but he ate it all then tooo another bite out of it then the Color of the Devil Furit start to turn to an Original Base Furit. "Sakura Dance" Luffy called out then Sakura Petal start to Appen twist around him. So Luffy Walk forward while the Sakura continues to follow him and Pick up his twin Blade and Bring it to his Room Along with his Mom letter and Picture. As Luffy put everything down and sleep on his Bed he Drift into Dream

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FlameCookies
FlameCookiesAuteurFlameCookies

So it's your boi the author, so I'm commenting on this novel to tell you what you will expect after writing 15 chaps: Bad: 1- The first chapters will be the worst thing you'll ever read. 2- The story will be so flawed as this is my first novel. 3- I'm so bad at imagining stuff so flawed world and character building is expected. 4-Bad grammar as this is again my first novel. Good: 1- I try to make this novel the best it could be. 2- I (will when I have commenters, sad) use your thoughts to approve this novel as I want you to participate on creating this novel. 3- I'm a very hard working man. 4- I'm a very good friend. 5- I love writing so it's not expected for me to drop this one, not with all of that support. And a lot of other stuff! So please give this novel a chance, and please of you want to drop it, read until chap 10 then decide! Anyways It was your boi FlameCookie. PLEASE GIVE ME A CHANCE!

LAZY_BENGAL_TIGER
LAZY_BENGAL_TIGERLv2LAZY_BENGAL_TIGER

Loved your story really but you need to work more hard as there are many errors. Don't stop keep going and you will eventually rise to the top😉

01king_aurella
01king_aurellaLv201king_aurella

I like the story. Even in the first chap the demon is cool I like his wholesomeness like he just said 'that's an interesting human you got there, alright I will grant you your wish' it was as if they're just wishing for a piece of candy. And yeah the father's a trash too. When I hated a character that's when I know what an amazing author you are that made me hate a character. Totally like it.

Rosnocht
RosnochtLv1Rosnocht

OP MC LESGOOOOOO! AY, the comedy is great tho. this will be a great guilty pleasure reads for you! The story is unique in it's own way, but precisely the narative. KEEP IT UP AUTHOR PLZ. promise me u will edit the messy first half of your story tho. Cuz the story is good so don't let it go to waste!

Lexinor
LexinorLv2Lexinor

I... This is unbelievably good it actually makes me want to cry as a fellow author to be quite frank. There are few to no grammar mistakes from what I've read and the story continuity and general quality is just so good. I'm excited to see this author become a top writer on the website and even beyond it!

FlameCookies
FlameCookiesAuteurFlameCookies

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA..... I love this story, its cool. Like me! hehehehehehehehehhe, I call this self support so dont blaim me..............

TataK43_
TataK43_Lv1TataK43_

Ah yes, a main character with stepmother. Ehem..anyways, the story itself is good. Although your paragraphs are way too long at the first chapters, I ignored that and just enjoy the story. Keep it up.

Eaagles_wings
Eaagles_wingsLv4Eaagles_wings

It has nearly everything your imagination needs in there, takes time to develop, best the best part - It is first person POV ❤️ so better to imagine myself in it...definitely recommended🙌🏻

mrant12
mrant12Lv2mrant12

Very interesting and humorous. I like the pace and the character development. Excellent story! Stay strong and keep writing! Let's hit 100 chaps at least!

Angel18k
Angel18kLv5Angel18k

The best one so far for me in fantasy. I'm loving the character development of Almer. All other characters are also good but I'm in love with Nira. Hope ML gets the happy ending.

Mary_Algen_Guiang1
Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv13Mary_Algen_Guiang1

I always read the author's own review first. The author humbly asked for a chance, saying this is his first book. But when I started reading the book, I can say that apologies are not necessary. I love the story plot. and I went ahead and read until Chapter 10, and I can say that the writer is doing just fine. From Chapter 1 to Chapter 10 is nothing but a flawless narration. here is a perfect 5 stars.

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