Inkbank

Thanks so much for your encouragement. I really appreciate it.

Thank you so much. ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you so much. ❤️

Hello! Thank you so much for reading, I really appreciate it. I've been under the weather for a really long time and barely recovering. I will update the book in a day or two! ❤️ Much love. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

You're welcome. ❤️❤️❤️ Hearing this makes me so happy! And yes, there will be more from me when this is completed!

Hi there! Thank you so much for reading thus far, voting, giving golden tickets etc. Your support means the world to me. It's sad to see you leave as at now and I do hope you come back soon. I'll try my best to increase the update stability so this doesn't happen. Love, Inkbank. 🤍❤️

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You're welcome!

I have only read up to chapter three and I can tell that the story has great potential. I love the story idea and how it flowed from him being in the coffee shop with his stepbrother and stepsister in-law to his death. I'm not entirely sure where I stand with the pacing and that may be due to descriptions I suppose.In terms of description, it was quite alright but I feel like a little more needs to be done to allow readers to immerse themselves deeper into the world and character emotions you're creating with your story. From Austin's story in the prologue, it is easy to sympathize with him but just on a surface level. A little more description and readers will have a deeper emotional connection with him just from the early stages. Most of his story was told in several short sentences that did not allow a build up of feelings/emotions attached to it. This will also make the pacing seem less rushed. In chapter two; instead of splitting his physical actions into short sentences, all of that could be combined into a paragraph where his actions have a flow. Overall, you did a great job and I look forward to reading more.

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