Daoist351660

this is how I feel when my alarm wakes me up in the morning and I'm still half asleep and can't figure out what's happening

even when authors do the 'little did I know' thing well its garbage writing and really pulls me out of the story. like why would you just blatantly tell us what's gonna happen later in the story instead of just foreshadowing it a bit and letting it develop naturally.

I dont understand all these reviews saying Mc is smart when he's basically retarded and the only reason anything works out for him is because the author decided that it will. also he doesn't even have accelerators powers he has some willpower based telekinesis that also makes him good at math for no reason because he doesn't even seem to need it to use his powers.

the Mc is literally 2 years old and already recruited captain America, fury, hank pym, and the ancient one to help him take down hydra and other stuff so I'm guessing he's gonna be running around as a literal baby for most of the important stuff in this story because it would honestly be ridiculous if he wasn't in complete control of the world by the time he's an adult with the knowledge and powers he has.

it's pretty obvious that all the real comments have been deleted. this story is absolute garbage and the worst thing is its not even free garbage. author I understand you need money but the least you can do is write a decent story if you're gonna try to make people pay to read it.

I don't understand why anyone would choose to create a black character. like you kinda project yourself on the character while writing so shouldn't you want the character to be the best they can be? whatever tho I'll just try to pretend he's not black.

the author must be genuinely retarded to write this shit and think that it was good. the second he told Talia about his system she would have captured him and used him like a farm for cyberware. he could have easily taken out any random shit from the system and sold it for millions but instead he's selling for like thousands of dollars which probably wouldn't even cover the cost of the materials he created let alone the technology.

I read until chapter 30 but I just didn't like the direction it was going. also you shouldnt just write people off as trolls or something just because they dont like what you wrote. maybe you should try taking criticism in a more constructive way and understanding what it is they dont like about your story.

it was stupid to give him a ready made crew that could pretty much take over the world by themselves at the start of the story. from now on any struggle that happens at all is completely fake because they could solve it at anytime. also he can't even use the main power of the world haki it seems like he basically got ntred out of his own crew. seems like it could be a decent quality story but the author just made alot of stupid decisions.

maybe he has a speech impediment or something and makes kun sound like queen? cause I can't think of any other reason you could confuse those two words.