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i would say it is just popularized term, if some type of utilizable energy appeared out of nowhere most people would call it mana or Qi unless someone gives it another name.
The idea is that there is so many demons that it will be pointless to control them all, also if the two powers didnt agree on the system of taking the demons and Angels they would drown the World in weak creatures that pass the barier and noone would win, but i understand if its confusing i will look over it and try to make it more understandable.
I know grammar is my weak side and I work on it I am confident that the later chapters show dramatic improvement when compared to the earlier ones. I will be trying to edit the chapters in my free time. Also, I hope you didn’t base your review entirely on grammar, hopefully you can tell me what you didn’t like about the story.
The only way i see for those clan to work is by having a dictatoship with overhelmingly strong leader but by doing this all of the members would just try to overtake the leader, having such concept of a clan is very self-destructive in my opinion. Such thing is in "birth of a demonic Sword" but the mc there is in good relationship with the clan leader and gets enough resources to not Care about that.