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If Aang is older, is Bumi older too?
Don’t pander to the audience to get more views. It may work short term for views but it ruins the story for all the readers who would be here long term.
As someone who came here directly after finishing a re-read of A Magical Journey I’m getting a sense of Deja vu…
The internal voice is normal Quinn. Before he went to sleep he let Sin-Quinn take over so Luxuria is piloting his body at the moment.
Red fits him as is
Random Omnipotent Being
“… my left leg.” <should be right leg
100 years*
Something about the way you type spell names makes them not show up. Either they show as “” or nothing at all making it hard to figure out which spells he is using
When your first thoughts are manipulating others… yeah Slytherin sounds about right
Love the idea but the lack of quotations or any sort of separation between narration and speech really killed it for me. I jumped through a bunch of the future chapters and I didn't see any. It's something small(ish) but I feel like even something that simple can really change the story's flow and will improve the reading experience
lol, bet!
Don't they need to use the time magic from the underwater labyrinth to activate the one in the sea of trees?
His world has 2 years protection not him. If he leaves his world that protection doesn’t count for him. He can’t go to Harry Potter and no one else can come to Saint Seiya but they could meet in another world before that time is up
Crazy how you can say all this when the story's not even yours. Cloud9Stories has the same EXACT story on FF.net under the title Meddling Giant AND has more chapters. This is almost word for word their story not yours.
This is plagiarized from Meddling Giant by CloudNineStories. There are more chapters available both on here and on FF.net. This is almost 1 for 1, but the chapters here are split into segments.
This is THE EXACT SAME as Meddling Giant by CloudNineStories. Word for word.
If this is his new position he should ask the administrator to split off a piece of his soul and put it into a weapon to make a zanpakuto for his reward
That or the existence of a conscience denotes a subconscious that fights back against being warped similar to how his warping with [Reality] is temporary because it’s resisted by the World’s Consciousness.