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Living with the scarab in the natsu verse

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Lisez le roman Living with the scarab in the natsu verse écrit par l'auteur Tahmina_Begum_9138 publié sur WebNovel. A fan of the Natsuverse gets sent to the natsuverse, yeah you may think that I am living a dream nope I have to deal things like death apocalypse, mages that want me and my hero work as hero identity,...

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A fan of the Natsuverse gets sent to the natsuverse, yeah you may think that I am living a dream nope I have to deal things like death apocalypse, mages that want me and my hero work as hero identity, and on top of that I have the scarab from DC the red but a Scarab non the less oh god help me

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Raziel_Acedia
Raziel_AcediaLv4Raziel_Acedia

Love the idea but the lack of quotations or any sort of separation between narration and speech really killed it for me. I jumped through a bunch of the future chapters and I didn't see any. It's something small(ish) but I feel like even something that simple can really change the story's flow and will improve the reading experience

Atalyn_Navia
Atalyn_NaviaLv2Atalyn_Navia

The writing is chaotic, there is no distinction between narrative and dialogue between characters, even the author's notes are not marked to separate the contents of the novel, really messy and made me lazy to read because it made me confused when reading between narrative and dialogue, sorry if the other ratings are low but that's what I can conclude when reading the first few lines of the chapter due to the chaotic writing

AncestorDuck
AncestorDuckLv3AncestorDuck

Spelling mistakes, no or misplaced punctuation, terrible grammar, and no labeling of conversations/thoughts. This Young Master has long been enlightened in the Dao of MTL, yet this Young Master still couldn't understand anything.

Guaca
GuacaLv4Guaca

I enjoy the idea of having a red scarab like blue beetle the mc is powerful and is a hero which I like the only problem I see are the misspelling that the story has I mean I have only read the 1st chapter but still you can’t even go a full sentence without something being misspelled so for now for me it’s a 3 star.

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