honestly i don't really have an answer to that, or any tip really since me myself just write whatever cross my mind. well if anything when the mc self monologing, i imagine myself as the mc on that situation so what you see actually me ranting as the mc in that situation. i hope you understand what i mean.

yeah just me being shameful here, but really this is my first fanfic i have ever done. but really really if you like it please give some review and i will try to improve my writing more.