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Taro1hCommentéAnything that has “Earth” and “human/terran” should be out. Lacks inclusion. Unless you plan on extermination of all non human sentients or their enslavement. Cause that’s what I would assume if I was a non-human meeting your government for the first time (Did they kill all non-humans).
Ch 84 New Government Name (Voting)- Taro1hCommenté
Why use this name? If they going to have non-humans someday in the ranks then this is a dumb name.
-United Human Empire - Taro1hCommenté
You could write “flashback” if you going to do one. Cause if not a flashback then I am completely confused.
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - Taro16hCommentéAs Snape watched Sirius and Remus disappear into the night, a flicker of determination ignited within him, steeling his resolve to keep a vigilant watch over Harry Potter, the boy who carried the legacy of Lily Evans within him. For Snape, it was a solemn vow—a promise to safeguard Lily's son at all costs, even if it meant confronting the ghosts of his own past.
- Taro17hCommentéHe made every single one of them feel pain they had never felt before and made them want more of it the next day.
- Taro21hCommenté
Sooo basically he is a knockoff mystique.
I think mc mutany power will be Transformation ( with store dna ) - Taro21hCommenté
Dude dies before he finishes his education. His magic is trash. Get an adult who died and actually had skill. Or you get someone who at least lived through to adulthood. Snape, old lemon drop, Harry, Nevill, Hermoine, Greengrass, Grindlewald even Newt. But you choose the guy who dies while still in school. Didn’t have a chance to even broaden his knowledge.
I have decided further template be batman,hei (darker than black) top tactician without his deconstruction and transmutation which will be developed by mc , and kaneki ken has healing ,, they are one of best characters also there will be cedric degory from main universe not au to give mc hp Magic - Taro21hCommenté
Is the grammar devolving the more the story progresses?
David:who are you and how to you find me without seeing me and don't play trick as I can tell you are a special person and can easily solve them - Taro21hCommenté
At least not without a voice modulator
Now I am wearing a hood a mask to cover my face I already have pick the knife from kitchen some pen , gloves, ok I think as I don't even have a gun but worry not as I will be able to get it tonight. So what I have to do is simply beat them pick their things and run without showing my face . I also have to be ready in case of unexpected situation such as meeting daredevil or any other vigilante or villian. I will also not speak infront of other ,ok let's leave. - Taro21hCommenté
Just need the bloodline. That is what made Baki so op.
6.Baki hanma as he is op to without abilities to - Taro22hRépondu à Beryllium_I
- Taro1dCommenté
Why don’t they call the potter house elves? They should still be in hiding or waiting for him to call.
Mipsy, bustling around the room, added her enthusiastic endorsement. "Mipsy agrees! Master Harry must have a party, a grand one!" - Taro1dCommenté
Wow! First time a novel actually made Snape show how much he actually cared for Harry! He may be a mean tsundera and biased as hell. But dude was willing to fall on the sword when it counted
He took a step closer, his dark eyes flashing with fury. "You speak of trust and protection, yet you fail to acknowledge the betrayal and deceit that have festered beneath the surface for years," Snape continued, his voice rising with each word. "You may have fooled others with your facade of wisdom and benevolence, but I see you for what you truly are: a manipulative puppeteer, pulling the strings of those around you to serve your own agenda." - Taro1dRépondu à Riger82_
Name!
There is an increased activity of dark magical creatures, or as they call them there, evil yokai, which does not mean anything good. - Taro1dCommenté
???? A fist? This and that does not compute.
But, I Didn't feel any soft lip one me. Instead I was hit by a fist. I flew back and fell on the sand. I deactivated my fruit ability that's what I was hit. - Taro1dRépondu à SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
Weird everywhere I look I see that is gran was a black. Where can I get information saying she was a greengrass?
In fact, our families share a deeper connection than you might realize. Your grandmother, Euphemia Potter, was a Greengrass before her marriage. She was my father's aunt, making us distant relatives. This familial bond makes your story even more significant to us, and we feel a strong sense of duty and affection towards you. - Taro1dCommenté
Isnt she like his cousin or something?
As the Weeks passed Narcissa explained that their relationship was only carnal as she was contracted to marry Lucius Malfoy, when she graduates from Hogwarts. - Taro1dRépondu à Dark_PersonJJ
Can you blame her though? She was gone long before he was a twinkle in his daddies eyes.
"My father trusted you and see what happened, he sacrificed his life for the sake of this village and now his son in living like a beggar..." - Taro1dRépondu à Psan
? Why? Only thing would be different would be the distance. But it’s a teleport. Doesn’t matter.
The sun's surface burned my skin at first, but it wasn't long before I stopped feeling anything. - Taro2dCommenté
Should be lower. Who goes to marvel with just a bare bone system.
INT: 11