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Uzumaki's commandments

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Lisez le roman Uzumaki's commandments écrit par l'auteur nexusstar21 publié sur WebNovel. Tatsumi died mysteriously one day but he worked up in the world of naruto.Not having any chakra in a clan known for having lots a chakra is going to cause alot of problems in his life.But his troubles...

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Tatsumi died mysteriously one day but he worked up in the world of naruto. Not having any chakra in a clan known for having lots a chakra is going to cause alot of problems in his life. But his troubles didn't end at just not having chakra his mother mysteriously caught a terminal illness causing her to be sick. Having no way to pay for her medical bills life for tatsumi seemed hopeless. That is until he awakened the power of the first commandment.Armed with the powers of the ten commandments and the demon king. He became a legend in the underground shinobi world known for his cold demeanor,cruelty and blatant disregard for human life. Earned him the name the black devil.But one faithful encounter left him to wonder is he the only transmigrator in this world. So watch his journey unfold as he makes freinds and enemies along tge way. Will he be able to save his mother and those he cared about or will he be subdued by the commandments becoming the next demon king

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I think this story and character have potential just need to make changes you need to properly outline the story from the story start .There is creativity i believe you can make this a great story but for now the story needs some work .

LostWizard
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Many errors, hard to understand, very random. one second he fights three ninjas, the next a transmigrator and immediately after hundreds of enemies pop up.

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Reading it made me kinda angry. Too many errors and grammar is bad

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